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Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from kaleecat
Review:
this continues to be one of my all-time favorite de-aged Xander stories because of the strong sense of family you create for Xander, his papa and his daddy. not to mention the legion of uncles and aunts. There are moments that make your heart melt, hurt or just create a snicker. I also really enjoy the funny little friendship he forms with his 'hodses.' And the zoo scene was wonderfully Xander. it would be wonderful if someday you return with little one-shot stories.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [2 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from falsegod
Review:
awesome story
Review By [falsegod] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from SilentAddiction
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That was so CUTE!! I would love to see more of how the Grissom/Mac-raised Xander handles House! Does he still have that Spider-sense he had when he was little? Why did he decide to be a doctor? Did he never see the Scooby's again(not that he would care)? Great story!
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from serenityselena
Review:
awesome story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from OutForAWalkBitkah
Review:
Ok, bare with me, this might be a little long.

I haven't really got around to reading any of the baby/de-aging stories. I started reading this story so I could for vote the COAs....and....I *really* liked it. Several times, I was caught giggling 'til I had goosebumps.

I really got a kick when you brought in all the different CSIs and Xander gained all those uncas :) Sometimes it really does take a village....especially with Xander always wandering around. lol

I liked how you worked it so Xander was brought up in an environment that it was okay that he had two uncles that liked each other without having his "Papa" and "Daddy" like each other. I think it was a nice balance. I especially liked the way Gris and Mac handled the conference meeting.

When I got to the Mag7 part, there were a few names I didn't recognize. I kept thinking back and not remembering a Buck or JD. So I looked the show up and found out that you were using the TV cast. Since I've only seen the first movie, I also got a kick when I saw that Eric Close played Vin. I have always thought that he looks alot like McQueen.

I enjoyed this story so much, that I think I'll be giving the other baby/de-aging stories a try. Even more than that, I wis--whoops--I'm hoping that you decide to work in this 'verse some more. I'm wandering what happened from the time Xander was eight to time he started with House. Maybe he bumps in to Angel. Given that he's still alive and hasn't been dusted, he seems like the only likely person to still be around. Ooooo..I always liked their back and forth when Xander was still in high school. i.e.

ANGEL: This way. (looks at Xander) What?
XANDER: You were looking at my neck.
ANGEL: What?
XANDER: You were checking out my neck! I saw that!
ANGEL: No, I wasn't!
XANDER: Just keep your distance, pal.
ANGEL: I wasn't looking at your neck!
XANDER: I told you to eat before we left.
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XANDER: So, when you gave him my neck to chew on, why didn't you clock him before he had a chance to clock you?
ANGEL: I told you. I couldn't make the first move. I had to see if he was buying it or not.
XANDER: A-and if he bit me, what then?
ANGEL: We would've known he bought it.

Or maybe Spike. When Spike stayed with Xander after he had the chip, those were some fun scenes.
I got distracted. Sorry. Anyway, awesome story. Please write more. *Xander and boxer puppy dog eyes*

-OutForAWalk
Review By [OutForAWalkBitkah] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from Christy
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Wow...wasn't sure if I'd like it from where it started out, but it definitely grew on me. Wonderful addition to the site and rec'ed too
Review By [Christy] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from BerserkerNW
Review:
Good story. I like the idea of Xander becoming one of House's new fellows. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from (Past Donor)Kanzaki
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Oh I love this story so... And the House crossover at the end of the series is just win.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kanzaki] • Date [25 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from TheatreDreamer
Review:
I really love this story, little Xander is absolutely adorable! I look forward to reading more!
Review By [TheatreDreamer] • Date [4 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from AXanFan
Review:
I honestly do not usually read "baby" or "child" stories about my favorite characters, but I was intrigued by this so I read it.

You came up with a very unique twist and I loved how sweet Xander was and how much he effected everyone he met. I was a bit worried about all of the different cross-overs, but with them all being in law enforcement it made sense that they could work together or near each other from time to time. You made it work.

I am disappointed that you finished this so soon. It felt as though you got tired of this story and decided to just rush through aging Xander from 5 to 25(?) in one chapter. I understand the desire to move on to other projects for a writer, but as a reader I think I could have read another 20 or 30 chapters as Xander grew up and interacted with his fathers and many "uncles" and "aunts".

In any case I loved what you did -- it just ended too soon. Thanks for sharing you creative vision.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Spell, One Wish" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Ok...(stay with me, I'll get there, I promise!) not usually a fan of...

a) baby stories
b) mpreg/2 daddy kind of stuff
c) most wish stories
d) stories where Willow is the villain, without any good qualities.
e) super all knowing xander stories
f) hyena/master of the pack xander stories

However... I *really* like this one... You put together a thoroughly enjoyable story and I was hooked enough that I read it in one sitting. I think probably one of the better decisions you made was to not try to put mac and Grissom together. Nick and Greg really did fit. It had just enough Reid for me -- usually i don't like the smarmy little git, but 'bruder' was very cute. I think what made all the elements work for me was that they were mostly logical (I didn't buy the magnificent 7 bit; really wished the Criminal Minds one had actually happened, however) and no one thing took over the story.

Glad to see a story where Dawn and Tara were the good guys, and glad that Mac and Griss didn't stay in the dark about the magics... Wish I could have seen Xander meet some of the sunnydalers, but who would still be alive when he grew up? Maybe things would have ended differently for Tara, if she'd stayed away from Willow... Anyway... thoroughly enjoyed this.

Peace,

Blue.

Plus, it was touching and I really could see both Mac and Grissom go after the school they way they did.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from Obsidian
Review:
Interesting story *TWO Thumbs UP!*
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from calileane
Review:
Perfect. All chapters are perfect. So much that I'm sad there's an 'end' written in the last chapter.... Tell me it's not finished? Please?

As you see, I came, I read, and I loved this story very much. 10 isn't even enough to give to this fiction. 20/10 would be better. It's 100% better than any other I've read. I so love your work on this I could spent hours trying to find the right words to say it.

Thanks for writing for us.
Review By [calileane] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from SarielLunar
Review:
This was so awesome and adorable! I love it! Can't wait to see what you have planned for House.
Review By [SarielLunar] • Date [13 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ". . . Is Change My World." from AnjxrAlways
Review:
Wow! So awesome! I love all the new people Xander meets and how he helps to fix things. And what is Spencer? hmm?
With this new profession I could see Xander getting to consult and check on everyone along with meeting new people. You have hit on my favorite shows. I could see him meeting Jim and Blair from The Sentinel. heehee!

Great work and hope to see more soon!

Anjxr
Review By [AnjxrAlways] • Date [12 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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