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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Can't tell you how often I read this story and still find it funny it puts a big grin on my face. It's sad that it was only one shot and there are not a few more. I would love to read how the tech-lab will need Buffy to explain how she altered the crossbow. How she beats the other cadets who think she is easy to put down. Oh so many things I want to read but I don't think that's gone happen so I will do with this story.

Love it
Review By [bradsan] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
OMG ....
that was hilarious ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Cute! No idea who Edgerton is, but this fic made me laugh. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Agent Ian Edgerton is from Numb3rs. He's a sniper who trains the FBI cadets at Quantico when he's not chasing down bad guys. He was in episodes Sniper Zero, Spree, Pandora's Box, and a couple others I'm not remembering right now.
http://redhawke.org/content/view/17/11/
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [22 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlaygrlIca
Review:
love this so much I think buffy as an cadet then Ian calling her in to work on a case with the numb3rs crew would be a great story you wrote them beautifully here
Review By [SlaygrlIca] • Date [17 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Yeah I can see Buffy giving Edgerton a headache.....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [4 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Oh! Crossbows aren't strength-based, so it's shooting farther because Buffy modified it using her weapon sense/training and not because she's the Slayer. Sorry, got mixed up in my previous review. Still cool

One thing though:

--Buffy frowned angrily. "He pulled my shirt off!"

Should be in its own stand-alone paragraph, as it is you have it coming on the same line as Edgerton's speech.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [17 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from katimaviklindzy
Review:
Anytime I need a laugh or am suffering from Edgerton withdrawl I come right to this fic. It's just to cute and funny! I hope you plan to continue or write a sequel.
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
Review:
ROTFLMAO oh this is just too funny, thanks for the laugh
Review By [spring] • Date [27 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
Pretty funny, but I thought your story title would refer to the link below instead of a crossbow =)

http://www.mobilewhack.com/hello-kitty-rifle----killing-you-with-cuteness/
Comments from author:
OMG! I so didn't know that rifle existed! lol! Yeah, I just know that Buffy would want that rifle, if only to annoy her boss Edgy. lol! Oh, I so have to use that rifle in yet another Fed!Buffy ficlet.

Thanks for the link and the review!

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [25 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JessRS
Review:
LOL
Good job. I'm sorry to see it's complete, but it was still a good one-shot. ^_^
Review By [JessRS] • Date [18 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tannin
Review:
hey I would like to see the Epps' brothers reactions to her.
Comments from author:
I've actually been working very very slowly on that. She does play up that blond Valley Girl act.

Thanks for reading!

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [tannin] • Date [27 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Deanie
Review:
LOL. This is absolutely hilarious.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from katimaviklindzy
Review:
*g* That was great, I do hope there's more like this comming.
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SilverAndSage
Review:
This one made me laugh out loud.

I like stories which make me laugh. (Makes my husband look at me funny, sometimes, though...)

Thank you for sharing it... Please write more?!


Eleanor
Review By [SilverAndSage] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
excellent chapter. totally agree with him - do not like blonde buffy
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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