Wow what a story you have me reading this one for days hell I was even reading it at work. The only fault I have with it is that I think it could have use a bit more of the events of Sunnydale in it. Don't get me wrong I enjoyed the smackdown of Glory. But I like the other cast members of Buffy should of been in the story a bit more. Anyway thanks for the great story Bye.

great fic. although i don't like you yanking Ben away from Felicia and Jenifer.

i was readin an hp/sg-1 crossover fic and during a sequence where genetics was involved i had a flash thought to your story. it was kinda random but whatever. what i was thinkin was that chamber that could awaken latent animal genes and give the human the abilities of the animal, plus the new and improved rebirth chamber thats would lengthen peoples lifespan. i thought why didnt cordelia ever use it? i mean its been stated that xander was gonna out life her but with the rebirth formula and whatever animal her dna leans towards woulda prolonged her life even longer, so i was just wandering why she never used it.

It started off great, well written and everything. And then, it started to drift downhill slowly. Agonizingly slow, yet relatively quick in comparison to how long the story actually is. I couldn't make it no where near halfway through this story. Couldn't take much more after the graduation and the start of the road-trip.

It started in excellent fashion, then you built so much onto it you weren't doing a very good job hanging on. I recommend in the future that you plan out steps you want your story to take and spend more time on characterization and character development in general as well as sticking with one group of characters for a time and then switching - brief flashes of the characters lives works better on television than in a written format. Toward the end I didn't care about any of the characters and was just reading to know how the story ended.

Absolutely amazing, though I would have preferred Cordelia not be a main pairing and that she-hulk be with Xander.

I love this story but I don't really understand why it ended where it did? are you planing a sequel? Just to tie up some of the ends? Please?

So whatever happened to Marcie?

great story! well done.

sweet

It was a great fic in general, but the ending was way too short and stilted. I'd really like to see a couple of things addressed, such as an epilogue with Mystique and her kids and how they are getting along (or not) a couple of years in the future; or things like the fact that Logan is actually Sabertooth's half-brother, and thus Xander, Ben, and Graydon's uncle. Maybe something with what happened to Hydra and Captain America since those were kind of left hanging.

Great Story! I would have liked to see Xander get with the 2 extra cat hotties that Buffy said he would get if he did not get Black Cat. I would like to see you work on and complete The Child of Rao Before you start anything else. A Alexander Creed / Pokgirl crossover would be kinda cool too, but mostly I really want more Child of Rao!

Brilliant :) I can't believe it's over already...

Thanks for such a long, enjoyable story! My only compliant is that Xander became a background character after his clone Bengali took over, which was a little off-putting.

It'd be cool if you updated "Child of Rao", or "Eureka!...So Go Shower or something", or "Potterville", or "TIVOR."

Yeah, after 89 chapters I can say this is long enough, and it was a fun story too.

A part of me would like to see you do a sequle with Ben as an Exile (own every issue of the series so I love good crosses using it), but I understand if you're burned out of the verse after such a long story.

On the other hand I'd love to see more Child of Rao or Tivor, so whatever you decide to work on I'll be sure to R&R.

well thanks, there is one short story I've been thinking about that would fit better under your Xander as Marvel Style. After the Replacement episode he keeps splitting in copies of himself after the spell is reversed like Jamie Maddrox. I can just see a stampede of Xander's running away from Anya with a crazed gleam in her eye.