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Review of chapter "Sifjarson" from Typhonis
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Sif, Sif, Sif, Sif, Sif, never make a bargain with the Norns without first stating what your payment will be. I can't see how this can't help but blow up in her face anyway. If they thought Loki was bad before this may very well.....

Also depending on the universe.....Fenrir, Hel, and Jormangundr may wish to have ...words with her, as will Frigga. I'd take my chances with Harry's older siblings myself.
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [13 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sifjarson" from gingerkid
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Would love to see more of this!
Review By [gingerkid] • Date [12 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sifjarson" from Bobboky
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Nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sifjarson" from Omegaprime
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Wow, Harry is going to hit the roof when he finds out who he really is.

Also things might explode as well.

Keep up the interesting work.

(What is the DLP site that one of the other reviewers mentioned?)
Comments from author:
DLP is DarkLordPotter, a most heinous hive of scum of villainy where dreams are torn to asunder and cliches are mercilessly mocked. It's a good place to find interesting stories, but if you are a writer and aren't prepared for harsh criticism, they will eat you alive.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [12 Dec 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sifjarson" from SmacksKiller
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I really liked this story. I wonder how Harry will react to knowing he was abandoned by his birth mother, one so full of arrogance and prejudice. If you keep the Deathly Hallows, it would be interesting to see Harry's interaction with his half sister Hel.
Review By [SmacksKiller] • Date [11 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sifjarson" from Ahdamnit
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Why do you keep posting HP bits on a BTVS site? I don't understand the point in this. You might want to consider posting them on FFN or DLP where they belong instead of here.

Every time I see you update I'm hoping you'll do more Xander stuff but I'm constantly disappointed to see mostly HP garbage instead.
Comments from author:
I just post whatever little bit I write. Lately, been on a Potter binge, but I am currently working on a Xander one shot.
Review By [Ahdamnit] • Date [11 Dec 14] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Commander" from SadJack
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This story and its following chapters shows great promise for an epic telling. Will you be writing anything further?
Review By [SadJack] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Son of Light" from Bobboky
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nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fenris the Wolf" from Rich
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Very well done. Fenris is one of my favorite characters from Norse mythology (as is Tyr); I never would have put him into the Potterverse, but you've made it work.
Review By [Rich] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fenris the Wolf" from raxadian
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This would work better if Xander was the wolf.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Dark Song Bird" from raxadian
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I really like this idea, way better than the third movie.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A God In Hiding" from raxadian
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Faith being Xena... It fits damn well!
Comments from author:
Doesn't it?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes to Ashes" from wonderbee
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Wow, a bit dark there with a Harry who has gone down a bad path it seems, and wouldn't it be something to see what happens when the Bat comes to take him down, and how much trouble he'd give him to do so.
Comments from author:
His ability with fire is uncontrolled and linked to mental illness, something I had never seen done before.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes to Ashes" from Omegaprime
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Oh dear, the Joker has escaped (again) and now he has firepower.

*Ducks thrown rotten food and axes*

Sorry about the bad pun.

So Harry has the ability to use fire and has used it on people and is now going to work with the Joker.

Well it looks like Batman is going to have a hot time in the ol' town tonight.

D'oh.

Keep up the interesting work.
Comments from author:
Not really work with the Joker so much as being used as a distraction by the Joker for the purposes of escape. Not a long term partnership.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fenris the Wolf" from Omegaprime
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Ok, Odin needs a good smack to the head and the Fates need to be smited.

Harry/Fenris was just trying to live out his life and now he is back home to his punishment.

I'm surprised Hermione didn't try to talk to(tell off?) Odin but I don't blame her or the others for not doing so because Odin might overreact and smite her/them.

But the fine folks at the wizarding world might be asking some interesting questions when they look at the battleground, like: Why does the big V look like he has been bitten in half? Where is his top half? Where is Harry's body? (Might be disintegrated) Where did these big paw prints (if there are any) come from?

I can see that the events of the Avengers movie might change with Loki saying "screw it" with what he was doing and go with Thor when he tells him that they found his son, or he might go even crazier at the same time and work harder with his new allies.

Keep up the interesting work.
Comments from author:
Hermione might be opinionated, but Odin is Odin, badass and full of glory, powerful beyond belief and capable of penetrating through the Hogwarts defenses with ease while bringing an entire army of superhuman warriors with him. I wouldn't have said shit, especially if my best friend just turned into a gigantic apocalyptic wolf and ate the bad guys. Consider her in shock. If she had spoken, Odin would have no second thoughts about destroying everyone there for daring to defy his will. He has done it before with entire worlds and would do it again. Peace through superior firepower is how he rules, step out of line and Odin lays a smack down so harsh that it becomes legend.

If the Ministry can modify memories and erase evidence, don't you think freaking Odin Allfather can do the same with far greater ease? The dude is so magically powerful that Midgardian magic doesn't even touch him, it goes around him due to the field given off by his own aura.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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