Review of chapter "Jack the Knife" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting, but who is "Jack "the Knife" Rayne"?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jack the Knife" from texaswookie
Review:
Fun, now add to the chaos, After he somehow meets the scoobies he offers Buffy and Xander Hellhounds as pets or teaches them how to summon them to help with patrolling. Then to add injury to insult one takes a bite out of Angel.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
"I won't kill you, oh no; I'll just spread the word." "What? That I'm psychotic? A murderer without victims? An-" "-eligible bachelor with a thing for older women, worked your way up from humble beginnings to earn a medical degree at twenty, from Oxford no less; and that you've recently fallen into bad habits that would easily be cured by someone finagling their way into your poor, broken heart..." "You wouldn't." "Try me."
Comments from author:
LMAO! Oh, wish I had thought of that!
Review By [LordSia] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lily Luna's Evil Plan" from Keldin
Review:
Okay, that was more than a little creepy. I'm not sure if I should say that's a good thing or not, if you know what I mean.
Comments from author:
Yes, I do know what you mean. Creepy is creepy, I was going for a realistic female Caligula with an Electra complex. Did it work?
Review of chapter "Lily Luna's Evil Plan" from ElDani
Review:
This last one-shot was a bit creepy, but I really loved the characterization of both Potters.
Comments from author:
Well, it was meant to be creepy and disturbing so I'm glad that I succeeded. If you thought it was normal, then I'd be worried. I tried to make the characterization as believable as possible. I really pictured them, their actions, how they reacted in my head then described that. It came disturbingly easy to me.
Review of chapter "Lily Luna's Evil Plan" from Infinix
Review:
Very nicely twisted.
Comments from author:
*Bows* Thanks you, thank you, I did my best.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lily Luna's Evil Plan" from eriktheviking
Review:
Disturbingly plausible. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks very much. Wanted to bash Ginny without any real whining or unbelievable actions.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry 'Houdini' Potter 2" from Xanaris
Review:
Are you going to continue writing anymore of the Houdini stories? It's probably one of the better HP cross with X-Men that I've seen, and I'd love to be able to read more.
Comments from author:
I might write one or two more in the series, depending on when or if inspiration strikes. It was just something I had to get out of my head. All of these stories are up for adoption if you can find anyone who wants to give them a go.
Review By [Xanaris] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lily Luna's Evil Plan" from texaswookie
Review:
creepy
Comments from author:
That was the point. Needed a creepy villain with a believable complex that would have an advantage over an overpowered HP.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lily Luna's Evil Plan" from wonderbee
Review:
Dang. I've got to say that Lily Luna has been thinking about this for awhile it looks like, and I would not look forward to that future time when she decides to put things into effect, as I'd say that day will be a not good one at all, even as it looks like Harry would have a bad fight on his hands.
Comments from author:
Yep, I made the perfect adversary for him. Voldemort is all talk: blah, blah, my daddy didn't love me, blah, Slytherin's Heir blah, genocide, blah, worship me, now you die, I'm a god, blah, blah, blah. Really boring fellow, actually. Lily Luna, well, she's a Slytherin with cunning, ambition, and lot's of Daddy issues. To give her the same treatment: I love Daddy, Mom's a bitch, nope Mom's a whore, gonna make Mom pay, my brothers are idiots, achieve ultimate political power, make babies with Daddy, leave one hell of a mark on the world. A female Caligula who looks like a teenaged Anne Hathaway was the basic idea for her.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
There must be major fallout for Kenn's torture, is Tara going to call Xander out on his cavalier use of Kennedy? Faith and Xander are a bit mission focused to be that clueless. The potentials in Sunnydale is moving the canon forward there?
Comments from author:
You need to re-write the review because I can't read this one. I hope English is not your first language.
Review of chapter "Son of the Dawn III" from Doodle
Review:
Awesome ficlet. Excellent chapter. 1,000/10
Are we also going to see anymore of the "A God In Hiding" oneshot and "The Hart" series oneshots?
Comments from author:
Probably the Hart one, but if I did anything to A God In Hiding then it would need to be re-written. It was kinda my first and like all first times it was both sloppy and much too brief, but now that I have some experience under my belt I'll give it another go, seeing if I can some wowing action going on......wow, that sounds very perverted....
Review By [Doodle] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Son of the Dawn III" from DragonBard
Review:
So, Luke's Lucifer?
BTW: You misspelled dimension. You kept switching the i and the e.
Comments from author:
Yep. Thanks for pointing that out.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Son of the Dawn III" from wolframhart
Review:
Enjoying your Son of the Dawn saga and eagerly awaiting more.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. Glad you liked it. : )
Review By [wolframhart] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Not Rated