I like how you rewrote the story so that it actually makes sense. But I miss how Xander's name was cleared in the first story.

After reading only most of the first chapter I've already come to the conclusion that this story is utterly unbelievable. First that there are mysterious magical security cameras that caught Xander blowing up the school, and didn't see the sixty foot+ snake the Mayor became. Then there's Xander's parents; you know the people the Scooby gang never even met giving evidence that he's with a "gang" of girls. I call B-S on the whole works.

Then there's all the other plotholes that I could drive a semi truck through just at the beginning. Not to mention the ones pointed out in reviews.

I'll quite thankfully give this a pass; if I were you I'd work on making events not seem so utterly contrived to force your plot forward.

It's like you've forgotten that Xander was in prison. He gets scared to easily or at least shows it way to easily. Had 2 good friends in prison for 5 and 3 years and a couple other acquaintances locked up for longer and they all came out buff and more rough around the edges and not really scared of anything or could hide it real well.

Also it's like your just waiting to hook up Faith and Xander so your keeping a man that just got out of prison and joining a biker gang from being laid. He got out of prison AND is in a biker gang but doesn't get any pussy? Just weird.

I liked the story, sorry to see it has been abandoned. About the only criticism I would make is in how many people who would seem to know better (Mulder, the Watchers from the Highlander series, etc) keep dropping the ball and assuming the worst about Xander. You would think they would be more able to see underneath the surface a bit more. Heck even some of the canonical Buffy characters seem to be missing some of the truly obvious in this fic.

Still despite those flaws, it would have been nice to see things worked out and the various misconceptions cleared up.

Hey, just wanted to let you know that some of us are still reading and wanting more!!!

I have to say this is good. I hope Xander does not hurt Tara and I hope she and he can be friends. I do not think Willow would forgive Xander for hurting Tara and I know Xander is still there someplace. Anyway great fic. I ussually hate super xander fics but this at least makes some sense. Well done. More one day I hope.

Nice to see that this story is continued in some way. I hope you will update again soon.

This is really dark, and twisty, and layered... but really good... I'm just starting to get into Highander so this is a whole new thing for me, but I diggin' it.
Cheers,
MJ

I'm a liking this story...
hope to read more soon...
:)

Always a good day to find this in the in tray. Well worked. Don't think Xander is going to think much of the whole Watcher set up given his history.

This. Is. AWESOME!! I loves it! Poor Xander. Geez. Poor guy can't get a break. At least he found Tara and Dawnie. Can't wait for more.

One word - AWESOME - please keep up the good work. I will certainly keep reading.

Will Xander get a teacher and will he meet Connor or Duncan McLeod or Methos or Joe?

::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::

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No teacher at this time. Just going to muttle through doing what he does best. I do plann on him Meeting Methos but it might not be for a while

Its almost funny the way the Watchers have misread Xander.

Enjoyed it.

thanks

I'm really enjoying this story. It's fascinating and frustrating to watch outsiders logically draw all the wrong conclusions about Xander and Sunndale events. Xander is very loyal individual and it was hard to watch him stick to his principles as he was railroaded by politics and the justice system. Poor kid didn't have a shot in hell.

As for Duncan Macleod, I love the self righteous lug, his hearts always in the right place. He's not completely Mr. Black & White as some might believe. If he were he wouldn't be chilling with Methos and Amanda. If you bring Duncan into the mix I hope you bear that in mind.

Thanks. I am trying to make this enjoyable and still get a little gritty. I had always thought if someone really wanted to take down heroes like Buffy and crew it would have been the easiest and best to use the legal system. look at Wolfram and Heart. they could have had the charged with desecration of graves, destruction of the property, trespassing. and or murder on any of the Legal demons around.

I mean look how many times they ruffed up Willie (assault at least). and the Scoobies only hit things so if they went after the bad guys it would only make them look worse.

as for Duncan I did like him. but he was no Saint, if you use the movies as well as the TV show, he killed a woman because she was a pre- Immortal, so she could be with him forever. never asked her just killed her on her wedding night. then as you said there was Amanda and Methos, Mac kind of looked the other way with them as long as he wasn't drug into what ever they were doing. and some times he jumped in with both feet and blamed them if it went wrong.

But he was still enjoyable to watch.