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Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from Zarthrax
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I like this one. Come back and update!
Review By [Zarthrax] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Dude! Damn cruel to leave it here! Sigh, why is he retaining so much? If he is retaining, then why hasn't he learned any mental discipline from them. Cannot have it both ways. The old woman shoulda taught him some meditation.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from Fayari
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I like how you rewrote the story so that it actually makes sense. But I miss how Xander's name was cleared in the first story.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Godogma
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After reading only most of the first chapter I've already come to the conclusion that this story is utterly unbelievable. First that there are mysterious magical security cameras that caught Xander blowing up the school, and didn't see the sixty foot+ snake the Mayor became. Then there's Xander's parents; you know the people the Scooby gang never even met giving evidence that he's with a "gang" of girls. I call B-S on the whole works.

Then there's all the other plotholes that I could drive a semi truck through just at the beginning. Not to mention the ones pointed out in reviews.

I'll quite thankfully give this a pass; if I were you I'd work on making events not seem so utterly contrived to force your plot forward.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First head" from Downery
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It's like you've forgotten that Xander was in prison. He gets scared to easily or at least shows it way to easily. Had 2 good friends in prison for 5 and 3 years and a couple other acquaintances locked up for longer and they all came out buff and more rough around the edges and not really scared of anything or could hide it real well.

Also it's like your just waiting to hook up Faith and Xander so your keeping a man that just got out of prison and joining a biker gang from being laid. He got out of prison AND is in a biker gang but doesn't get any pussy? Just weird.
Review By [Downery] • Date [17 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from addictedtwotext
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I liked the story, sorry to see it has been abandoned. About the only criticism I would make is in how many people who would seem to know better (Mulder, the Watchers from the Highlander series, etc) keep dropping the ball and assuming the worst about Xander. You would think they would be more able to see underneath the surface a bit more. Heck even some of the canonical Buffy characters seem to be missing some of the truly obvious in this fic.

Still despite those flaws, it would have been nice to see things worked out and the various misconceptions cleared up.
Review By [addictedtwotext] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from Dedischado
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Hey, just wanted to let you know that some of us are still reading and wanting more!!!
Review By [Dedischado] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from FireWolfe
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I have to say this is good. I hope Xander does not hurt Tara and I hope she and he can be friends. I do not think Willow would forgive Xander for hurting Tara and I know Xander is still there someplace. Anyway great fic. I ussually hate super xander fics but this at least makes some sense. Well done. More one day I hope.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [19 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from sunamee
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Nice to see that this story is continued in some way. I hope you will update again soon.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
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This is really dark, and twisty, and layered... but really good... I'm just starting to get into Highander so this is a whole new thing for me, but I diggin' it.
Cheers,
MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from lorwen
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I'm a liking this story...
hope to read more soon...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from Lady
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Always a good day to find this in the in tray. Well worked. Don't think Xander is going to think much of the whole Watcher set up given his history.
Review By [Lady] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from DarkFaerieYumi
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This. Is. AWESOME!! I loves it! Poor Xander. Geez. Poor guy can't get a break. At least he found Tara and Dawnie. Can't wait for more.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter eleven" from Dedischado
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One word - AWESOME - please keep up the good work. I will certainly keep reading.
Review By [Dedischado] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
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Will Xander get a teacher and will he meet Connor or Duncan McLeod or Methos or Joe?

::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::

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There is only one success - to be able
to spend your life in your own way.
- Christopher Morley
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Comments from author:
No teacher at this time. Just going to muttle through doing what he does best. I do plann on him Meeting Methos but it might not be for a while
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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