Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
Again, interesting. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous
] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bugeyedmonster
More please. Part of me wonders what kind of 'teasing' and flack Dani might get from her fellow overly macho cops if she starts a 'relationship' with Willow. Of course, Charlie would be okay with it. But I could see him giving Willow a death threat about hurting Dani. LOL!
Oh, remember that scene with the Latino guy in the car shop, who was so busy staring a the beautiful lady (Dani) that he didn't notice the gun and the badge (which was very visible) until Charlie pointed it out to him? I just found that scene funny, as I know a lot of overly macho latino guys who probably wouldn't notice that a beautiful woman had a gun until she shot them with it. Maybe.
Can you imagine Willow and Dani poking holes in his male ego? That would be funny.
Anyway, I'm sure that Willow will be good for Dani, and vice versa.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster
] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissingAuthor
How you are writing Dani's "reading" of Willow is very neat. Really looking forward to your next installment.
Review By [MissingAuthor
] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Terrific job with both Dani's and Willow's characters in this and your first story. Having attended many AA meetings over the years, your story brought back lots of memories. I don't think any of the others who I heard testify almost ended the world. At least I hope not. Lol! I look forward to more lovely stories in your series.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [11 Sep 08] • Not Rated