So, Willow is starting to learn that she can do more with Amy helping her with some magic, than she could with Tara. And a link with Angel? Interesting. But I think that sooner or later, someone is going to have to get Faith out of jail!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Falling Leaves, Twisting Prophecy Pro-3" from Harry
Review:
Something tells me that Willow and Tara are NOT going to be a couple in this tale. Red and Amy, Maybe. Only time will tell.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I really, Really, REALLY hope you see fit to come back and conclude this some day. I have read it several times now and it all flows marvelously well. It would be nice to see how it all turns out. Should it turn out that you have posted the rest somewhere else, I would appreciate a link. Thank you for a fine piece of work.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great story. A couple pairing I have never seen before with Willow & Angle. Not to mention a mostly good Amy with an evil/chipped Spike. Look forward to more.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I just reread this story from the beginning; it's amazing. I'd forgotten how an intense and complicated story can simply grip my attention. It's an unflinching view of each character's strengths and flaws, and it shows the essential courage of them all. Getting in touch with D'Hoffryn and the Order of Teraka was strokes of genius.
Review of chapter "Falling Leaves, Twisting Prophecy Pro-3" from Alkeni
Review:
Willow, much more than Xander, Anya or Tara was the primary mover behind Buffy's ressurection. The others were all the ones who had expressed doubts, Willow was the one who overrode them all.
This has been really good so far! The whole plot with the ultimate evil Bad Guy AKA Hunter, Willow and Angel's shared connection/dreams, Willow de-rat-ing Amy and her attraction to Spike, and of course the rescuing of Faith - all of it is very interesting and I have been captivated throughout. Its been very original as well :) I also love how everything is slowly coming together - all the players slowly working towards/with each other - and how the future/the ending is still completely unknown.
Anyway, this story has been a great read - I am so glad that I read it, even if you never finish it. Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I wanted to take my time, plot-wise, about things coming together, so that it feels like a natural development instead of 'well, the characters are now working together because the writer says so, regardless of how well that fits with the characters'. I also like to play with the ideas of consequences to actions, and how sometimes those consequences leave a mess that doesn't just affect the one who did IT (whatever IT is) but people who had no connection at all. And that sometimes, there are troubling choices that you may not be happy about even if it is the best option (that you are aware of/can see).
I try to have my stories be distinct from others writing.
I am actually working on an update for this one now. I have part 66, and am working on 67, I will either post at the conclusion of 67 or when there's a 68, depending on how the story is working.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Wow, I just read the whole story so far in one sitting. This is fantastic! I love your relationship between faith and willow and amy and then amy/spike and willow/angel and the xander/anya thing is totally spot on. This is totally something I can see Traversdoing, the evil bastard. Love how you are reluctantly bringing Lindsey into it. Maybe he could be forced to help and end up with Buffy. I think your Wesley is great and I love how you are tying everyone together. And go Xander for the great research ideas. He iskicking but. I can't wait to hearhow contacting the Tarakans goes. That should be interesting and think of their global resources if they could be convinced to help, very cool. Please continue this is fascinating. You are doing a wonderful job atweaving everything together.Please write more.
Review By [boo] • Date [26 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love the latest chapter. It's nice to see that Lindsey is still the brains in Wolfram & Hart. My guess Gavin won't be long for the living. Ok so is the book that Amy is copying in multimedia? I also like that Wes and Caitlyn are getting closer. Also, I'm thinking that Willow is the guardian. I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [DawnStar] • Date [9 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Wow. Great story, not sure about the Willow Faith friendship. She was harder on Faith than anyone, great bad guy though, interesting ships, and excellent plot.
Review By [TweedWizz] • Date [15 Jun 04] • Not Rated