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Review of chapter "part 2" from Pardryll
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I love it! Although, "defiantly" implies someone defying something or someone else. "Definitely," on the other hand, implies there is little to no doubt as to the rest of the statement. Just a word of advice, cos I see it repeatedly. Please show us more!
Comments from author:
ah. thanks. I'm a touch dyslexic so sometimes i miss stuff like that.
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from nightowl
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Your teaser is just that. I can't wait to read more. If the characters are still causing trouble you could always try bouncing ideas off writers in some of the yahoo groups. Maybe you could ask some of your favorite writers for help. All esle fails just smack them (the charaters) in the head with a licorice whip and tell them to behave. Good luck.
Comments from author:
I'm actually really glad my muse came back. Had a rough year last year family wise and then started a new University, so i think my muse got left behind in the hustle and bustle.
Review By [nightowl] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from musiclover
Review:
interestin i would like to see it done if your still thinkng of doing this
Comments from author:
I am working on it. Things went south for me for a bit and my inspiration left. I have a good chunck written but i dont want to put it up quite yet. especially since i am a little stuck right now. any suggestions you have would be welcome!
Review By [musiclover] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackdragon
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I hope that you continue with this story, Id love to see where it's going. :D
Review By [Blackdragon] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PsychoWing
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It's a good start. I'd be interested to see where you go with it.
Comments from author:
Again. still working on this one. I might upload what I have as the first chapter, but still debating it. I really dont have a good beta/sounding board yet, and some of the minor characters are giving me problems.
THEY WON'T DO WHAT I TELL THEM!!!!! GRRRRRR!
Sorry, rant over. But keep an eye out. Once the kinks are gone, this ones definatly going up.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from angelkitty
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very intresting i would like to see where you take this.
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jez
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An interesting start. I really like the sound of this one. I've wanted to read a Xander crossover with the nightmare before christmas for ages. Please continue it.
Review By [jez] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stardust
Review:
You've got a great start here. I look forward to seeing how this all works out. So will we see any special appearances by his 'family' from the other side of the trees?
Comments from author:
all I can say is family will be involved, but not before Jack get a crack at him.
Review By [Stardust] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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