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Review of chapter "~~ Greeting the Neighbors ~~" from DieselDriver
Review:
Manshoon is a power mad nutcase... By our standards anyway. I'm sure Dickie boy won't be very happy with him or his plans. Apparently in this "buffyverse" he is a lot more knowledgeable about what's going on in the town and anyone planning bad things for the town will soon be found out and I suspect, chastised severely. It's gonna hurt.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~~ The Start of Diplomacy ~~" from DieselDriver
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So he's a bigotted racist with a turn toward the brutishness. He's a product of his world and like ours, it produces all kinds. He hasn't done anything that I know of to deserve being stuck in a dungeon nor I expect, what's going to happen to him there as Mad Maggie starts experimenting on him.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~~ The Whirlybirds get the Wyrm! ~~" from DieselDriver
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Ho hum, just another night for the slayer of evil... ROFL
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~~ Back on Earth ~~" from DieselDriver
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Faith obedient??? Waaahahahahahaha!!! Travers has another think coming if he thinks that.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~~ A Changing Sunnydale ~~" from DieselDriver
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I'm guessing that if the removal of Sunny D included as much underground as it apparently did, then the ocean would be pouring in and the hell mouth would be pretty much inundated.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~~ Stacking the Deck ~~" from DieselDriver
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DO NOT GET IN THE MOM'S WAY!!!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~~ Slipping into the Unknown ~~" from DieselDriver
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Cool Start! I hope the rest is as good.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from Chikageko
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Very nice update, though I've got to wonder what happened to the Meroe dragon Whelps. In the chapter where the blue clan attacked you mentioned dozens of hatchlings sitting hungry in the home cave, but when you described the willows there there weren't any dragons.

Also, since you're using the ugly ass hobgoblins to make a mining track are you going to use them to build the sunny rail project and a easy grade passage between sunnyhell and the dragondoom?

Had a funny thought, if you decided to somehow let some of the dragons live or save the ones you mentioned earlier, they could go to work for sunnyhell as supplementary power utilities. Their lightning brt could be used to light the city and power the initiative tesla guns and even teslat tanks while the hobgoblins provide metal for their manufacture.

Also, why not bring a complete star jammer or three to sunnyhell? I have little doubt the crew could be hied with the dragons hoards to explain and dissect one of the starjammers and sunnyhell could reverse engineer them to be phenomenally better, securing them a trading contract with Lantan.
Comments from author:
The Hobgoblins will eventually be working on SunnyRail, but not for a while.

The Hatchlings, I will admit I forgot about. You're the second person in as many days to point that out. Now I have to find a way to fill in that plothole without it sounding contrived.

I did have other Hatchlings put into a fostership program, so maybe these can be put there, too.

Starjammers are coming, mostly because they're awesome.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from Hurlekain
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OMG! You killed Xander! You bastard! Seriously, did not see that one coming. He hasn't had a big part and I was hoping you had something big planned for him… Just not that. Oh well, it is still excellent work.
Comments from author:
Yep. I didn't want people to see it coming. And I do have things planned for him.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Hurlekain] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from dlgood
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As a quick follow-up, I definitely enjoyed the Buffy - Malar scene. I imagine the characters might attract the attention of many of the Deities, even pre-Time of Troubles. I like how Buffy hasn't bothered to learn enough of the deities to recognize Malar, but also how he would view her (outside of her pesky desire to protect the weak) and sort of push her to embrace the hunting side of the Slayer. Half expect a confab between Torm, Ilmater and Lathander as they also line up to influence her...

A part of me started wondering if twin Xanders would get the attention of Beshaba and Tymora, but perhaps not... I didn't see it going where you went...
Comments from author:
I really worked hard on the conversation between Buffy and Malar. It just seemed like Buffy would be his kind of mortal, even if she is a goody little two shoes. Lathander is really not too pleased with what's been going on in Sunnydale and he at least partly blames Buffy for letting in even more undead to the Realms. Ilmater, yeah, that kind of makes sense for Sunnydale.

I really tried to make Xander's story a surprise, and I think it's worked thus far.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [dlgood] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from Albino
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Great story

The question is now is which Xander that Bane did resurrect as. Since it sounds like he get the memory from Xander. Did he get the memory from Buddha Xander or the other one or did he get memory's from both?.

can you put up a map over the country Sunnydale is ruling over know. Since the two maps in this story do not show the villages that have been popping up around them Sunnydale since there arrival.

Keep the chapters coming
Comments from author:
That is a good question. You'll have to wait for the answer.

I'm putting together another map of the area. It has changed from the last maps I put up. I think I'll work on that today.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Albino] • Date [8 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from dlgood
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Just stumbled across this fic a few days ago. Major kudos!

Very much in keeping with the spirit of the show and the Realms mixing in both serious and campy. I'm a big fan of your recurring culture clashes and also the number of unexpected outcomes and unintended consequences

Especially those fiendish emus. Up there with my friends noticing the Half-Dragon template could apply to any living creature, and trying to figure out what sort of circumstances could lead to a Half-Dragon Black Pudding and just shuddering.

An enormous story. Lots of different elements. Really appreciate that you keep such a great sense of fun throughout.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoy it, it's been a delight to write even if it is a lot of work.

The fiendish emus are a fun little thing. Some of them are even Half-Fiend. What's really scary about your combo is that fiendish critters must have an INT of at least 3 and Half-Dragons have a +2 to INT, which means they qualify for taking levels. So a fiendish Half-Dragon black pudding could level up as a monk or maybe even a barbarian.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [dlgood] • Date [6 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from baduqwa
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For the love of all that is holy (i.e. twinkies), please tell me you did not just kill of Xander! TWO Xanders even! What an epic cliffhanger. Good stuff.
Comments from author:
I am the anti-twinkie. I just killed two Xanders.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [baduqwa] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~Dealing with Deities~" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Aiegh! No. Not the Xanders!

On the other hand, Bane does not know with whom he has just f***ed. Too bad for him.

All in all, I reread the whole story so I could remember where this was in the scheme of things and this is an awesome story and great update. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Bane thinks he knows more than he really does. I think he'll not be pleasantly surprised.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Not Rated
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