So far, this story is quite cute... If a bit fast. I feel that you could have added a lot more detail and depth to story, with more character interactions and dialogue... But I like it.
Review By [Kanzaki] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is one of the few LoTR crossovers I have read on this site. Part of my disinclination seems to be authors leaving the story more or less the same as JRRT just inserting a character. I suppose that is why so many sites have fiction stories written about the actors instead of the characters.
That being said, I like how it is developing so far and will try and read the rest tomorrow.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [10 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Elven Sorceress" from BloodOfAReptile
Review:
I would strongly suggest you get a beta reader. Your story's plot has merit, but I don't think I'm going to read any more of it because there are spelling and grammar errors peppered through it... and at times it's a bit disjointed and hard to read.
A good beta reader would be able to help fix those minor problems to make your story a more enjoyable experience for the reader. :)
Review By [BloodOfAReptile] • Date [11 Apr 06] • Rating [4 out of 10]
I absolutely adore this!!! Such a wonderful story. One hint tho... You might want to have it edited. I found a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Can’t wait to read the sequel. In fact.... Here I go now.
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [19 Oct 04] • Not Rated
I have read many Willow/Legolas pairings and this one is my favorite by far.
Review By [Poetess] • Date [12 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Elvish Blood" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
It's kinda hard to read. Very choppy.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [9 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Elvish Blood" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Their restlessness reminds of the Matrix - you know, the agent telling Neo that their first attempts were an abysmal failure because the human race thrives on conflict and their first attempts were to create a kind of paradise.
It's interesting what strange connections can be made...
Great story, I'll be looking for the sequel (which may already be started, I didn't pay attention to the date...)
Thanks for writing!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Elvish Blood" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
A very good, enjoyable story. However, I must recommend that you use spell check, and if at all possible, find a beta-reader who is good with grammar. I found the errors to be very distracting, and almost gave up on the story before I even really got started. Keep up the good work with writing, and don't forget to proofread!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Elvish Blood" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Love it. You have done a great job with it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
hols
Kanzaki
