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Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from WhippingDawn
Review:
I had read that story once, and when I realized it, I kept reading! It's a masterpiece! Never have I read a story going so deep in the slayer lore and rewriting parts of it and make so much sense! I'm going to look for your other stories now!
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [22 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhippingDawn
Review:
Wonderful story, just the way I like them! :)
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Vickzie
Review:
Wicked story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
The story started out kind of rough for me, with all the big time-gaps et al, but once we got to the return of Buffy it all started coming together. Overall I'd say I liked it.

I'm still not sure exactly what's up with Titus and Zeak, other than the latter's desire to rule the world, but maybe that's just your sequel hook. I guess we'll see...
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from (Current Donor)vladt
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fun read, thank you. would love to read the other parts of this fascinating tale.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from maxthehobbit
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Not the greatest story I've read, but well worth the time to read it. Very imaginative. I really loved the banter between Willow and Buffy and Faith throwing in a few now and then. Faith's partner seemed especially interesting to me particularly her weapons.
Thanks for sharing an extremely good story.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from maxthehobbit
Review:
You might want to hold your praise of the person reviewing and correcting your story, they failed to catch several awkwardly worded sentences and failed to recognize that Buffy has green eyes, not blue. I have no idea why so many people make that mistake. However this story is plenty good enough to keep me reading it. I want to see where your imagination takes it.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from maxthehobbit
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Way the hell too many author's notes. Tell it in the story not in notes.
I'll reserve rating this story till I've finished reading it, but copying it is a pain in the butt with all these lengthy notes.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from ecifrog
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A wonderful story! Suberb writing.Great plot. Fantastic characters. Thanks for sharing :)
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from lunalurker
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*bursts into applause*

Fabulous! A wonderful and entertaining read all around, thank you! Buffy and Willow forever. :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Gideon
Review:
Now that Buffy is in charge of the slayer dreams hopefully they will be less cryptic!
Comments from author:
Ahhhhh...that wouldn't be any fun!!!;)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from PATM
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Outside of the longish wait between chapters I loved the over all story. The difference between
mature Buffy and snarling Buffy didn't seem characteristic of an enlightened person and no one
in the room reacted, Xander even less. I guess Buffy's violent response to conflict after the fall of Sunnydale became her default position emotionally. Is that going to be explored in further updates
to the story line you've set up?
Review By [PATM] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from caradens
Review:
great update
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you! Glad you liked it. Next story will be coming out soon;)
Review By [caradens] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from RebeccaAshling
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"Ozymandias" is one of my favourite poems. Cool that you quoted it. Well Zeak and Titus are still on the loose. I take it that they'll get theirs in the mopping up chapters. And may we have more Buffy/Willow smoochie and snuggle action? Aythengyew.
Comments from author:
Isn't that such a good poem...Okay, I did something stupid and forgot to change the story status. This one is over, it's kinda the first in a series. Don't worry though, the next one is 3/4 finished and the third is outlined. I will finish of the series, I promise!.....and the snuggle action will happen;)
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 34" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed Buffy's 'old-school' Chosen One kicking-ass demonstration for the newbie Slayers, including Faith's commentary.
Comments from author:
Always happy to please;)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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