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The Corruption of Uzumaki Naruto

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Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from Stormguard
Review:
Ya know... That explains a fair bit...

Nice work.
Review By [Stormguard] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from Elleria
Review:
Oh please update this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from eriktheviking
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Ah, the wonders of children and paperwork.

Great story, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from ReflectionsOfReality
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I just read this story again and I wanted to let you know that I still love it. I have read Kakashi's Lament a few times as well but this one really gives a hint of some of the things to come.

Reading it through the time an alternate method for getting Tsunade to be Hokage occurred to me. Get her to know Naruto first over a few days letting her reject being Hokage first thing only to drop the issue then there only for when they start to make motions of returning back to the village for Naruto to let Tsunade know that now that she has rejected the position it automatically goes to the remaining candidate. When her curiosity gets the best of her Naruto or Jariya tell her simplyy that it is Naruto's job. Tsunade horrified with the idea of either Naruto being in the dangerous position or more likely with the concept of him running a ninja village quickly changes her tune before getting really drunk.

Hope ther is more coming for either of these soon,
~Reflections
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from HolyKnight
Review:
Update, WHEN!?
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [27 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from wraithrune
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Brought a smile to my face :) nice story.
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from Bluesnowman
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Great job.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from Sunstar
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This chapter is absolutely perfect, Naruto becoming successor because he is hyper and wrote his name, and it would make more sense for letting him be in the ninja academy. The hokage is great just agreeing to it, and Hiashi speculation that it is Danzo fault is just so off the mark it makes me laugh.
Review By [Sunstar] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't leave scrolls lying around" from Bobboky
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love it
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drinks for the lady!" from Sunstar
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I love the fact that anko taught him all that and then forgot. Definitely a corruption lol. Its great the anbu dont bother her because she done that before and is a mean drunk. I could totally see her doing that.
Review By [Sunstar] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What happens when you leave books lying around" from Sunstar
Review:
A good idea for his inspiration.
Review By [Sunstar] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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