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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from Geektheelf
Review:
I greatly enjoy this story, and humbly request you update. May I refer you to your A/N in chapter 27, which I shall post here for your convenience.

Author's Note: Yikes! I was going through my stories, until I suddenly noticed that a whole YEAR had passed since I updated this one. Hey, it's not like I'm setting a record, or anything, since there are other unfinished stories on this site that are old enough to be starting the frakkin' first grade!

Regarding that, this writer would like to suggest in a calm, collected tone to other authors having these incomplete stories:

"GET OFF YOUR LAZY BUTTS AND START TYPING!"

Yeah, I'm talkin' to you. AND you. You, too, the one hiding behind their computer monitor.

(Prod, prod, prod.)

Don't you understand that we're the latest link in the chain of storytellers, from primitive times around the campfire to the newest twitter, all trying to answer the question of:

"And then what happened?"
Review By [Geektheelf] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from Elorie
Review:
Very much your best - any chance of more?
Review By [Elorie] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from tryingtobestine
Review:
Write more? :)
Review By [tryingtobestine] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from OlBear
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story, especially the dynamic between Faith and Xander. But Please! For the love of all that's holy! Update!
Review By [OlBear] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
A ton of great material in this story. And fantastic analysis on the Faith/Xander dynamic. It's one of the reasons that I enjoy that particular pairing so much. Good that it's Dawn who points it out to Faith though.. and her awareness and desire to become one of the 1% makes her a much more solid focus. I particularly enjoy the point that Xander having the Slayer gifts is a MUCH larger problem that he's been covering up, I hope we get to see another chapter from his point of view soon... the one in Vegas was particularly well written. Thanks for sharing this story with all the Whedonverse fans out there.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from thewrongalice
Review:
Found this tonight and read all the way through it - thanks
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [18 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from nomorebread
Review:
where's the next update??!!! Seriously. Update. This story is too good to be left unfinished. 'Chanting voice' Update! Update! Update!
Review By [nomorebread] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from wiltryit
Review:
Seems to me at the end of an earlier chapter, someone was going on about authors getting off their asses and finishing their stories. Well then, take your own advice. It has been close to two years since you posted anything on this story.
Review By [wiltryit] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from SledgeHammer
Review:
Krav Maga was indeed developed by the IDF, and is easily considered one of the deadliest of all the martial arts, though it is also one of the youngest. It is not based on a single martial art (such as the various systems of karate and ninjutsu), but a fusion of several forms of both. It is also the *only* martial art banned outright within professional MMA. Today, while most instructors of Krav Maga are still Israeli, there are schools of the art through most of the developed world - including, surprisingly, the Arab/Muslim world.
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from Traveler
Review:
I just want to join the many fans of this story who are requesting, hoping for, or just plain nagging for an update. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from semkirk
Review:
Great story! More, dagnabbitt!!!!! Soon!!!!!
Review By [semkirk] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Yar
Review:
Very nice - good action, realistic action and I very much like the training parts. Very Faith-appropriate, and consistant though multiple chapters. I like the spiritual parts (though all the Slayers in the world chanting Yah! was more amusing than dramatic), especially the ritual with the bowl. The quote sounds like a reference to something, though, and Google refuses to point me in the proper direction with the keywords "carpenter bride gift bowl". To what is that a reference?
Comments from author:
A present from Joseph to Mary.
Review By [Yar] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from wayneenz
Review:
Great story. Please continue it, or a lot of people with resolve face will be visiting you.
Review By [wayneenz] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from semkirk
Review:
Great story! Love it! Now to repeat/para-phrase your own words -- get back to work and write the next bloody !%$#$@#!~ chapter already!!!!

Sincerely,

Semkirk
Review By [semkirk] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from twlight
Review:
Oh you have no clue how lucky you are that Xander isn't dead. For the short time that I thought he was I was considering breaking out the pitch forks and clubs! I sadly have to agree completely with Dawn on how Xander feels about the females of the world and how we see him. ^_^ (can I have him please?)I really love how Faith goes about in her teaching others both the baby slayers(first patrol with her way cool) to the Watchers. I honestly think what she told them about what happened with Wesley and Mrs. Post was something that the Watchers NEEDED to know so that they don't end up in similar situations of not seeing when a slayer is going off the deep end or when a fellow Watcher goes off the deep end if Faith showing them and telling them what happened and they learned something from it than the pain from it is worth it. I do hope that you can tell by now I love this extremely wonderful story and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment and hoping that Xander gets his ass handed to him by all of the girls in the Cleavland house for making Faith feel the need to stay in Scotland. ^_^
Review By [twlight] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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