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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from race
Review:
I want a sequal please!
Review By [race] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from race
Review:
i would like to see more of this
Review By [race] • Date [12 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calikocat
Review:
The 11th division will never be the same. XD Yachiru would probably adopt Xander and Spike as her older brothers or something. I can see it now, Xander and Yachiru both on a sugar high and terrorizing Ikkaku. XD And then Spike rolls his eyes and drags them off to work off the excess energy by hunting hollows.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from shadowreaper
Review:
Oh I really loved this one!!! The last part made laugh for a while. Ten points all the way and I hope that you plan on making a sequel!
Review By [shadowreaper] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hecatonchires
Review:
More a prologue than a story, I felt. Was that implied spander?
Comments from author:
It wasn't supposed to feel that way, but I can see why you say it. If you mentioned it because you want more, then there's a good chance you'll get more. I was kinda inspired by actually getting reviews (happiness) and suddenly I have a couple scenes rolling around. I'm thinking to make it a series of one-shots, but I'm uncertain of how well I can write everyone in character - hopefully reviews will help me if I ever get off track.

And implied Spander? Well, let's just say I can't write romance but you can take whatever you like out of my stories (I will admit to them being my preferred pairing).
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
I'm at a loss with this one ... would need more info to give a better review .... other than - nicely written .. no typo's that I could see .. well thought out and what not to the end .. but just curious .. how could Xander fight there at the end .. when he was dead.
Comments from author:
*cough* Erm... because it seemed more dramatic? *cough* Yeah, I'll have to fix that.

And yes, I'm aware it has some tunnel vision going on with the story, but mainly because I don't think the back story matters much. Just imagine the characters moving on with life and coming to a reunion. I'm made the assumption there were all happy and Buffy had mostly retired. Hopefully the story still carried itself.

Thanks.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nightscream
Review:
I enjoyed this very much! i would love to see a "drabble" series come out of this if possible. I mean can you just picture the trouble Spike and Xander would put the teachers through in the academy?
Comments from author:
Hmm... Another reviewer asked for me to continue and I was thinking of doing something similar. The advantage of continuing it by drabbles is that I wouldn't have to do the more boring scenes in between whatever drabbles I end up writing. If I do end up continuing this, it'll become a series (not a multi-chapter story).

I just have to think of some trouble they'd get themselves into first and hope that I can keep everyone in character!
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silvergaurd
Review:
oh i hope you continue this. I would love to see more/
Comments from author:
I kinda would love to continue it myself. But I know I couldn't keep everyone in character for it. Besides, I don't have a good track record of actually finishing series.

So sorry, but it won't be continued. However, if I ever write another little short taking place latter in the Last Battle world, I'll make sure to put it up as a second chapter (but please don't get your hopes up, it probably won't happen).

Thanks!

Edit: Okay, so after thinking on it some (and getting another review urging a similar idea) I've decided there's a high chance I'll continue this. But if I do, it'll become a series, not a multi-chapter story. And it'd probably be closer to connected one-shots than a flowing story.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Coqui
Review:
It wasn't bad. Zaraki appeared out of character, however, describing a battle as "truly beautiful". That sounds like something Yumichika would say.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Yeah, but I also think it's a bit out of character for him to be there at all... You make a good point though. Do you think it'd sound better if I just took that sentence out completely?

“You two seem like worthy souls. Makes me glad I took an assignment for once. Look, once you reach Soul Society do me a favor and try to apply to the academy, tell them the 11th division wants you.”

Actually, I think I like it better without the sentence. Zaraki isn't one to waste time with comments like that, is he?
Review By [Coqui] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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