I'm happy to see a kickass Xander who doesn't have a power. It doesn't happen all that often and I commend you for doing it. More than that, it's a great story so far. Hope to see more eventually
Review By [Peaslums] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
gotta say im really enjoying this, havent really ever seen and decent MGS x's hope to see you get back into writing soon, as i would love to see an update for this or Fury Of The Breast. ^_^
Review By [ChaosRonin] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
liquid snake is one of solid snake's 'brothers,' right? another big boss clone-slash-son?
i'm totally unfamiliar with the cross, metal gear or whatever, but what i do understand of the story's pretty neat. i just... xander killed riley sometime between 2001 (the past) and 2006 (present)? i'm still missing something. and if you say 'duh, didn't write it yet' i'll stick my tongue out at you [o:
Again, Good stuff. I like the way the game's and show meld in this. If I havent mentioned before I like the way the story goes completely off cannon early on but stays tru to the characters for the most part. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [28 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Willow Emmerich!?! Whoa! Never saw that coming. This is an awesome chapter, Mayrel and Teal’c working together, Snake gets seperated and is on his own in Area 51 and O'neil is about to be tourtered. Awesome, keep up the good work dude.
Review By [banditobane] • Date [27 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Whoa. Willow married to Otacon? Nice. I didn't expect that. Considering the fact that she can't do magic now...well, becoming a scientist seems logical. Nice job. I liked the constant updates. Keep it up!
Review By [JaredDrake] • Date [26 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heaven Burning" from banditobane
Review:
Awesome update.
Review By [banditobane] • Date [6 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Peaslums
