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Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from Harry
Review:
I like the changes you came up with for Dawn. Gives her something to get back at Buffy for, when she gets dumped on for being the "Little Sister".
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Hmmm, an empowered Dawn.... Potential there for some real fun...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from purrfus
Review:
Intriguing. I'm more focused on Xander, but learning a bit about Dawn's leftovers left me wanting more.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from lorwen
Review:
good story...
:)
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
Interesting. Kind of glad that it wasn't just Xander that got some fringe benefits, but Dawn as well. It sucks about the nightmares, though.
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from HermesAngel
Review:
Please more I'm begging here I've tried waiting but not I'm begging
Comments from author:
I've got a section nearly done - however, I'm looking for a beta reader.
Hopefully, it'll be up soon.

Thanks for reading - glad you enjoyed!

-MavenAlysse
Review By [HermesAngel] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from dhampirkinfolk
Review:
I love this series. Just read it for the second time. Will there be more?
Comments from author:
yes! I'm almost finished with another installment - just have to make sure there's no editing/plot problems. Hopefully, I'll have it posted within a week or two. Thank you for reviewing, it always makes me happy!
Review By [dhampirkinfolk] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from race
Review:
very cool keep it up
Review By [race] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from Loatroll
Review:
Very nice. I like how sneaky Xander was there with the "not any more mad now then I was before Halloween"

Thanks for the great read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from banner
Review:
I just read this series straight through from the beginning. I've been riveted. The pace is perfect: everything just follows naturally from the previous scene. Watching Xander (and Dawn) learn and cope is fascinating. I'm going to track down the game - you've really caught my attention.
Review By [banner] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from LFW
Review:
Good Dawn character, very enjoyable
Looking forward to more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from ShyBob
Review:
Although this fic was well written, it didn't engage me quite as much as the first one did. I'd hoped to see Dawn channeling a bit more Alice (read: show us Dawn kicking more butt, please). I hope you plan to continue this series, as I am curious (and curiouser) to see what you have in store for little Alice...er, Dawn.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [19 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from speakerforthesilent
Review:
Woah! This fic and the original were at least four kinds of disturbing. Very interesting though. I'm considering picking up the video game.
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dawn Kept" from CPTSkip
Review:
I enjoyed your first story in this series and thank you for this sequel, short thought it is. Lol! I liked it a lot. It is seldom we see stories where Dawn, even if she was at Helloween, is changed by the experience. I like how you are handling her character's changes and look forward to more stories in Alice's and CC's altered Buffyverse. I wonder if Dawn/Alice can cut the head off a vamp with one of her playing cards?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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