Aw! This was a great story! I'm glad Dean realized what an asshole he was being to Dawn and that he finally told her that he loved her. *happy sigh* She should have hit him though when he let that blonde kiss him. *g*
Lovely fic!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Not Rated
I really enjoyed the story. Excellent characterization I really think you captured Dean's persona. The story was well written your a talented writer. Rory:)
Review By [SwimTeam] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
That was sweet without being saccharine. The characters were interesting and believable. I enjoyed the way Sam stayed with Dawn, guarding her without getting in her way.
Loved the one shot! And while I would love to read more about Dean and Dawn I want more Dawn and House or Faith and Mikey or Dawn and John or Dawn and Ash.....please!
Review By [morgyair] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Nice story. Your Dawn reads like a real girl going through a crisis-- not like a charactericture of what we know she should be from the series. (sorry, spell check is failing me). I found it amusing that you had Dean and Sam going 'to piss' instead of going to the bathroom. That 'manly detail' was a nice touch in writing this from a manly p.o.v.
Lovely story, thanks for sharing. Sorry for the generic review, I'm way too tired (I have a cold) to make much sense, but I enjoyed the story, so Thanks.
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