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Review of chapter "Facing the past" from DieselDriver
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This is just so good. I think this is the third time I've read it and it's just as great as the first. The suspense and drama are well played and the conversations sound realistic from a comic book point of view. Yeah there are some errors in the grammar and such but the story telling makes up for that a LOT!

I wish I had time to beta for you Icebear but I just don't. Thanks for posting this excellent story. It's to bad we can't add additional recommendations.
Comments from author:
That's great to hear. And it is fine that you don't have time to beta, I am not really looking for a beta atm. But friendly eyes who want to read new and experimental stuff I write can write to me and I can send out PDF files with things like an unfinished Buffy/Arrow crossover, a Harry Potter Alternate Universe or even the first chapter of the last Buffy Carter story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 2" from agnar
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I don't have a problem, exactly, with the idea of the fic. But I find it much too difficult to buy buffy, willow and xander all 3 being mutants without any outside causes.

At least with the Halloween fics there's a mystical reason behind it. But there aren't so many mutants that apparently the only 3 in sunnydale would *just happen* to be best friends to each other.

It needs some other reasoning, explanation, excuse, whatever as to why those 3 happen to be best buds, and happen to be the only known mutants in town.
Comments from author:
I am not sure what you have been reading, but at no point in time is Willow a mutant in my story. There is nothing about them being known mutants in town and it is explained by understanding BtVS Season 1 and that this is an alternate universe fiction that diverges from Season 1 in a Marvel crossover universe as is clearly stated in the opening chapter. If you don't like it don't read it. I suggest understanding what you're reading before writing any sort of review next time, because otherwise this is just to be considered trolling.
Review By [agnar] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from raxadian
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Good end. And yes ius true, comics books usualy never end.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Days that matter, day 4" from raxadian
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Old Willow should just have killed Xander. But then, where is the fun in that?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Days that matter, day 3" from raxadian
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Ah yes, war is coming.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Days that matter, day 2" from raxadian
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Xander is an hypocrite, isn't he killing for his cause?
Comments from author:
Xander in the TV is quite the complex character just like the others, but he has moments of hypocrisy (Not telling Buffy about Willow returning Angel's soul, manipulating Faith to attack Angel later on and various other comments do indicate some level of this in him along with hundreds of other things). Besides yes at that specific moment he was being a lot of a hypocrity because he was blinded to his misdeeds because really facing them would be admitting to a certain level of villainy.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Days that matter, day 1" from raxadian
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So basically Buffy is a less powerful Dark Phoenix.
Comments from author:
Well, I was actually more inspired by Akira as in the Manga Akira for her powers.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 7" from raxadian
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So Willow will become the Black Widow?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 6" from raxadian
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Oh yes, this is going to end so well...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 5" from raxadian
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Yeah, home, and a place to train to fight.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 4" from raxadian
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So, she finally meets the X-men...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 3" from raxadian
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So, is she the Phoenix or something?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 2" from raxadian
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Yeah Charles, big humanitarian there. We aren't talking about a dozen, is just ONE more.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sundering Changes, part 1" from raxadian
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Poor little Xander.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facing the past" from DieselDriver
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This one starts a little slow but trust me, it's worth it. It builds to a dramatic ending. However, the ending could be expanded to several more chapters should TheIceBear want to. I'd like to read how they got from the end to the epilog. That would be cool.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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