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Review of chapter "Morning Neighbor!" from Neverwillmini
I like the overall feel of the story and the story line seems interesting, but the chapters are all so short!

Did they buy/move into Jesse's house? What happened to his parents - did they die too? (All the stuff was still in the house, Xander's best friend grew up their, the bedroom was decorated for a boy, etc.)
Comments from author:
Patience grasshopper, it will be revealed soon.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Setting Up" from healerweaver
Interesting, but it feels incomplete; maybe a bit rushed. Good, though.
Review By [healerweaver] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Day" from healerweaver
I thought the first chapter was good; this one had me chuckling. I especially like how you remembered what Spike had written at the bottom of the "Welcome to Sunnydale" sign. Or was it Dawn who wrote it with Spike's help? I can't quite remember.

If you need a beta reader for this fic, too, let me know. You know where I sleep.
Comments from author:
I think it was both of them actually.
Review By [healerweaver] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Single Tear" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
That is hauntingly beautiful. Sorry I don't know who Beatrice is.
Comments from author:
Beatrice is also known in the movie as Kiddo or B. She is played by Uma Thurman and is the main character of the Kill Bill Movies.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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