Nice work. Even without any dialog from Buffy we can feel her presence in the story. It is interesting to consider the changes which might take place in Sunnydale if she didn't return. Or maybe Cameron will tell her that she has to return - should Buffy be told why and be given knowledge of the future or not? An interesting question.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Great story with an interesting twist. Well written and readable, making a mundane scenario of 3 people watching a dancer complex and riviting. I'd love to read more, you should really think about continueing this. Fantastic job!
Review By [Doorway] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I truly hope that you come back and continue with this story. It would be interesting to see the relationship between John and Buffy, and between Buffy and Sarah. Now that they both know that she is gonna marry John, how would Sarah treat her, and would they tell John? Please come back soon,
Review By [zimes] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I just came across this story when I was looking at other stories that you had written. I really love it. I can see Buffy fitting into this universe the way you have written it. I really liked the way you built it up before letting Sarah find out exactly what Buffy would be to John. I could also hear Cameron reciting all of Buffy's accomplishments. I hope you continue to write this story, I would really love to see what happens next.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Wow, this was intense...but very very interesting to read. I have to say I enjoyed every aspect! I like the quiet grace you've described in Buffy, as well as the underlying hint of something dangerous in her. I appericate any author who can paint a picture as successfully as you've managed to so cudos to you. I hope to read more from you very soon!
Review By [pensivegal] • Date [7 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very cool start. Also very tantalizing. Now I want more! Please? Somehow I think Xander and Willow would either be very dead or pretty high up on Skynet's Wanted Dead or Alive list also. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Sep 08] • Not Rated