Review of chapter "Secret" from
manicReview:
THese were wonderful! Thank you. What an interesting cross, and you handled each one so well.
Review By [
manic] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from
dharkcharlotteReview:
Can't believe i missed the update! Gotta love Faith!
Review By [
dharkcharlotte] • Date [14 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from
BuffyHalliwellReview:
Interesting story! keep going you're doing good.
Review By [
BuffyHalliwell] • Date [13 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Warriors" from
SatoriReview:
You wrote:
{“You weren’t joking.”
She looks at him from the corner of her eye.
“I never do.”}
That should be: "I never am."
(or you could change John's line to "You weren't making a joke.")
other than that, good work.
Review By [
Satori] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spark" from
dharkcharlotteReview:
Drusilla! How fun. Posted to our comm as soon as you updated. Have a look:
http://community.livejournal.com/sccxoversReview By [
dharkcharlotte] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vague and Cryptic" from
dharkcharlotteReview:
These are great!
Review By [
dharkcharlotte] • Date [19 Sep 08] • Not Rated
