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Review of story "Extraordinary Gifts" from Anonymous Reviewer
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ok, this is good, but who is Pheonix? it's ok wen ppl make up their own chacter, but she's kinda confusing. please dpnt make her out to be perfect and everyone cant help but love her. and why is Dawn there? you'll say later wat her power is, right? and Cordys...and explain about Pheonix, lol...er...right? also, i thought wen they were recruited, it happened too fast. they didnt get any info on where they were going or who they were working for or nothing. or did they and i missed that part? i just dont think they would go that easily. and wasnt it set waaaaay back then? you should adress wat your changing on ur authors notes or something...er, other than that, its good, please update soon!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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