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Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Really liked the tie-in with Primeval!! Very good idea!
Comments from author:
Primeval is a good series to xover with, I might try another sometime.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from lucyferr
Review:
What, the Primeval storyline stops there? Wtf? No, I don't want to read your other stories, I wanna read this one! waah! waah! waah! :)
Comments from author:
Sorry, but I stopped watching Primeval not long after this, also lack of time for writing didn't help. I'm surprised that no one else has written any Primeval stories.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from lucyferr
Review:
Cool story this - I like Primeval, but the coverups piss me off almost as much as the gaping plot holes every episode... how can any coverup withstand the might of Youtube?
Comments from author:
Yes Primeval was good but it had its problems. Coverups v Youtube? Think attention span of the general public, weird bears in London only last as long as the next thing that interests the public.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Malyce
Review:
I have to say that you have produced some of the most entertaining crossover works I have ever read...and I've read a few! You selected some of my most favourite programmes, Yes Minister, The Wombles and many more and even dragged Lewis Carroll's creations into your stories and integrated them with a particularly delightful bunch of British Slayers with great aplomb! Mrs Fitz is an absolute gem and the American Scooby counterparts who have made an appearance have not detracted one little bit. Thanks for a fascinating, very funny and absorbing read.
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much for such a nice review.

Very shortly I will be putting the finishing touches to my last story about the London Slayers...all I've got to do is work out why Mrs F keeps getting killed and reborn! I'm sure I'll think of something.

Thank-you once again,
DaveT.
Review By [Malyce] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Great story. I hope you plan to continue this series.
Comments from author:
Thank-you Tempi,
Couple of stories still to go in the series, but I don't think i'll be doing any more concerning 'Primeval'.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [3 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Dude, like they say, there's no Overkill, just blow them sky high.
Cool battle scene, and the boss man from the critter hunters?? He's quite a moron.
Too bad the world has a lot of them around.

So... Faith's is gonna be a mommy?? I really wanna see The Ooff reaction to her pregnancy.

Poor Silvie, if she only know about Ripper past, she wouldn't be so scared about her hearth.

Cool story dude,congratulations =)!.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Cutter is not one of my favourite characters...it shows doesn't it!

Faith being a mum? We'll wait and see...MAW-HA-HA!

Thanks as always for the review.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Well, that ought to leave everyone nicely confused.

BTW, a bat detector (ultrasound receiver) would be pretty good for tracking those things. Needless to say the ARC crowd never thought to use one when they were fighting them, given their general crapness it isn't very surprising.
Comments from author:
Primeval; I actually quite liked the idea and most of the series (hence the xover).

Best characters; Lester; Abby and Connor. Least Fav; Cutter (I think it shows).

Like most series like this I think they expected the super-duper special effects to see them through. While I think this worked for Season 1, I found Season 2 disappointing. Plot ideas missed, too much reliance on weird non-historical creatures. Also while I was writing this I asked myself 'what do these people at ARC actually do?' I couldn't come up with a convincing answer. All they seem to do is shepherd things back through the anomalies...after a while this becomes a bit samey.

But as I'd started I thought I'd have to finish, unless season three bucks up its ideas I don't think I'll be doing any more Primeval xovers.

Thanks for the review. Only two more stories in this series to do...better work out how its gonna end!

DaveT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
To JanessaRavenwood; You're hating the wrong characters! If you knew the Primeval crew you'd hate Rachael for threatening Jenny and Cutter. I'm now hoping that she's eaten alive by a Gorgonopsid.

To Dave; Connor's feelings for Abby are canon, but are you basing Abby's feelings for Connor on the venom she showed towards Caroline or on the actors' real-life relationship?
Comments from author:
Good point about Abby, I'm actually basing it on the last scene we see her in on the last episode of S2 (as they're walking away from the grave). She so wants Connor to hold her hand but he doesn't seem to notice. That's how I read it anyway...I suppose its open to interpretation.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Gotta say, I was already thinking about checking out Primeval, but right now I'm hating them so much I think I'll only bother to tune in if someone tells me they were all eaten by ManBearPig or something that came through a portal. THAT I'd love to watch...
Comments from author:
Hey they're not that bad! You should check out Primeval its one of the few good progs on British TV at the moment. They're just acting like any secret gov org would.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from MarcusRowland
Review:
They're going to start thinking they're dealing with Terminators or something.
Comments from author:
Don't think I didn't think of that!

DaveT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
I was wondering about the IDs too. Rachel, of course, could plead unconsciousness, but Lasha shouldn't still be languishing in jail. Humph having the hump sounds like a good enough cover story - much better than the one about the bear at any rate!
Comments from author:
Next Slaughtered Lamb's tale I'll have to explain away the ID screw-up...least ways I'm not Star Trek who seemed to forget great lumps of their past every episode!

You should have heard the cover stories about the escaped bears!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Gotta love it, but one thing keeps bugging me - you've said that the London slayers have "Get Out of Jail Free" government ID's - for situations just like this. Is there a reason they're not bothering to use them when being questioned and/or detained by british feds? *I* sure as hell would...
Comments from author:
It could be that this is all a put up job by the Home Office...or more likely that Lasha didn't pick up her purse when she ran out to help Olga and Rachael; and maybe racael dropped hers when fighting the predator. I also think that the Ministry of Administrative Affairs had cooled to the slaters after the Womble business.

Also there is a very slight possibility that the author forgot all about them!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Mcspender
Review:
It's true, no one is worthy of having the Faith... besides Xander, that's it =).

See ya!!!.
Comments from author:
I have to say I liked that little scene myself.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Is _anyone_ worthy?
Comments from author:
Good point.

DaveT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Samarkand
Review:
I've been reading your Slaughtered Lamb series and quite enjoying them. Primevil is a particular crossover I've been awaiting for a while. I've always seen the episode of the team in the mall with the velociraptors with Faith punching out the lizards.

Nice bit with Maggie McBride. "Green Fields of France" is a haunting song, isn't it? The Dropkick Murphys (a Boston celtpunk band) do a lovely cover of it.
Comments from author:
Cheers, wondered if anyone would notice that...make me sound like Captain Mainwaring, which reminds me I must do some work on my 'Dad's Army' xover soon.


Faith and velociraptors...hmmm. I think there's somethings even slayers need weapons for!

DaveT.
Review By [Samarkand] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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