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Review of story "When Myth Becomes Reality" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Thank you very much for telling us a little bit about Rayne! She sounds cool... I like that she has a history and so on. I'm looking forward to finding out more about her, etc. How her story affects her interactions with the scoobies and so on - I hope I was one of those you considered civil... I tried to be! If it came across like I was being rude or flamey then I offer my *deepest* apologies... I never, in any way, intended that :) Anyways, hope to see more of the fic soon!

DeppsDarling xx
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [2 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "When Myth Becomes Reality" from Anonymous Reviewer
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thanx for clearing up the confusion :) i really like the sound of rayne, she sounds really cool. please update soon!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "When Myth Becomes Reality" from Anonymous Reviewer
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ok, this is pretty good. Just one thing annoying me, who is Rayne?...you made her up, ok, but...wats her personality, wats she like? other than that, update soon!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "When Myth Becomes Reality" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Hey, I like the story - you write very well! I'm a little unsure about who Rayne is meant to be though... I mean, if you're going to develop her later (a.k.a. Joss Whedon and Dawn) then that's cool - I'll be patient. But I noticed you were pairing her with Will, and she's just sort of slipped in there without an introduction... are you sure she's not a Mary Sue? It would be nice to know what she looked like... some of her personality, etc. But anyways, that was just a little question. Keep going... just try not to make her a Mary Sue! I'm having a little trouble getting to grips with her at the moment, because I don't really know who she is or why she's there. But don't let this put you off - keep working on it because it's nicely written and I love the pairing of Willow/Jack!

DeppsDarling xx
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "When Myth Becomes Reality" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Who the hell is Rayne? If you're going to introduce new characters, please -introduce- them. I spent a couple lines there trying to figure out why Ethan Rayne was helping catalog books before I relized your Rayne is a girl and a new character. Confusing!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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