this looks awesome! Would love to see more.

I hope you are able to continue this story at some stage, it is very good! I wonder if Buffy or Spike will reach Dawn first and who she would trust more? The monks don't seem to have changed Dawn's eating habits so Buffy could prove she knows Dawn by referring to what she likes to eat.

Uh-oh! Knights of Byzantium in Colorado Springs? Good thing Dawn's new dad has not-of-this-world resources.

I am definitely intrigued by this story. I love the fact that you made Faith the other person to remember Dawn. Can't wait to read more. :)

You’re right Buffy would be ticked
When she discovered her sister’d been nicked
And having Faith know
Was a good way to show
The Slayer connection.
But in this ‘verse”
Dawn will soon need protection
For I noticed the curse
Of the Knights who say “key”
Or maybe the joke is on me?

Best review ever

OK, Identical guys are never good. Is Jack going to protect her in time or will Buffy have to swoop in to do the saving?
I can't wait to see the "Hi, I'm really your sister" conversation.

Oh man, you've got me hooked! Seriously, 3 chapters in and I'm in love with it! It is a neat twist to the dawn's real family plot.

Great start. The honey on the spaghetti is just uck. Everybody except Faith forgetting was really nicely done. More soon please.

So glad you finally came back to this. The suspense is beginning to eat away at my sanity... good writing! More soon and regularly, please!

Blue

Poor Dawn. I hope that she starts getting some memories back soon, atleast enough to stay alive. So, will the Monks be sending Buffy through to retrieve Dawn or will Willow have to come up with something. I imagine that since Dawn may no longer be a near perfect relation to Buffy that it would be hard to lock on to Dawn's signature (especially since Willow doesn't remember it) thus giving the opportunity for Buffy to end up in the right universe, but not right next to her (like maybe next to Jack instead). That could be so much fun.
I can't wait for your next installment and look forward to more.

Oooh, I really like the flash of her old life that Dawn's getting, and how Buffy and Faith remembered. Is it a slayer thing? I'd love to know who the new four are.

nice

O goody!

Please allow me to admire the cheeky audacity of that last cliffhanging line "What do you mean, who's Dawn!"

Love the story and can't wait to find out who Mom is.

It's short. So incredibly short. But Goddess, it's so well done. I want more. I'd really, really like to see more and I don't usually beg.

Agreed with whoever asks you to continue. This rocks. "Who is Dawn" indeed. What i'm wondering is... who, aside from Buffy, remembers Dawn.