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Halloween World: Twelve Years Later

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Review of chapter "Coffee" from Angelform
Review:
Some nice fragments.

I like Gabriel. Badass normals are a rare find in Halloween World.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I like Gabriel too, the guy is made out of 100% pure stubborn. He's popped up in a few other stories if you haven't already read them.
Review By [Angelform] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Severed Ties" from Weaver
Review:
Okay now that was tragic, particuarly since while the main story mainly features the better outcomes, you just know that there's more then one more case like this out there. Poor lad, it couldn't have been much worse for him could it?
Comments from author:
Yeah, it kinda bugged me in the main story that everything works out right in a world that should be a lot worse. So I decided to explore someone who in a way got a pretty good deal (keeps his own personality plus gets to be as powerful as Naraku), but ultimately got screwed pretty badly (mom doesn't remember him and wants to kill him). I think I'd really like to come back and revisit this character eventually. Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Weaver] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well that's one way to contact the dead" from misterq
Review:
An excellent addition. The poor child. It was this chapter that jump started my plot bunny - and if you've ever connected a plot bunny to jumper cables, you'd know what usually happens next. :)
Review By [misterq] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Messenger" from harpy
Review:
What a wonderful idea. I like your world.
Comments from author:
It's not really my world, credit for that goes to spaceman. He made it, I just play there.
Review By [harpy] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Messenger" from JediClaire
Review:
I have to say that Gabriel is one of my favorite characters and think he is one of the toughest sons-of-a-b*tch I have ever read about. Hope you write more soon.
Comments from author:
*laughs* That's sort of what I was aiming for. Tough with a touch of crazy mixed in. I liked the idea of a more-or-less normal human who took on the post-Halloween world and all it's horrors and won through sheer bloody-mindedness. Add in the entry for Determinator on tvtropes.com and a few real life stories of disterbingly tough individuals to serve as inspiration and I ended up with Gabriel. Glad you like him. If you haven't already read it, he first appeared in the Halloween World:Crossroads story entitled Witch's Cauldron and also featured in the story after that.
Review By [JediClaire] • Date [25 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Messenger" from DarkGoddess
Review:
Another nice addition to the Halloween World series. I find the idea of the Couriers interesting, I hope Spaceman integrates it into the main story. Unfortunately now I've got a rabid plot bunny of something to add to this when I should be sleeping. Oh well...
Comments from author:
Thanks. *goads the plotbuny*
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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