Wonderful story, I'm just pausing to comment on something that threw me off in this chapter. You've set the story at the beginning of the second season, but make a reference to Vampire!Willow, which didn't occur until the middle of season three. Timeline oops?
Comments from author:
Yeah that was a major timeline oopsie. Thanks for reading this, and I know it has been since, uh February since I updated? My muse has taken an extended vacation to Tahiti, and I'm trying to coax him back. He really doesn't want to live his Pina Coladas.
Slytherin
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bring Me To Life" from ArinnaBlack
Review:
Love your fic. Update soon?
Comments from author:
Thanks! And, as far as updates go, I'm kinda dead in this fandom at the moment. My Buffy muse has run far far away to Tahiti, but I'll try to coax him back as soon as possible. Thanks for reading!
Slytherin
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [31 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
woo! i love real family ficks, if she sticks around long enough i hope you still make willow witchy.
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bring Me To Life" from AngelBlack
Review:
Meh. I can understand the change- very Willow-ish, but I think the brooding was so much more relate-able. Anyway, good fic, continue please!
Comments from author:
Yeah, this is one of those stories where its either believable or not, I think my readers are split........and the next chapter should be soon, personal problems have kept me from writing, but they seem to be clearing up. Thanks for reading!
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of story "A Place in this World" from Darkblood
Review of story "A Place in this World" from spring
Review:
Thanks for the FYI.
Review By [spring] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "A Place in this World" from LordCorwin
Review:
If you're doing a major edit of the story .. you might want to mark this one as being Complete .... so it's not on my "must read" list that I keep track of ...
Comments from author:
I may have to do that......though I do hope you'll come back and reread it once its done!
Hello! I don't normally read Willow-centric, not because I don't like her (I do!) but because I'm odd and obsess over one character at a time. Anyhow, I got to reading this one, tho, and I enjoyed it immensely. I look forward to seeing what happens next. I just wish you had started it a season later, so Spike could feature in the occasional chapter. ~sighs~ Sorry! Waiting for more! . CT