Oh so very chuckle-worthy!

Wow. Just... wow.

Never read the cartoons, but it seemed to fit EXACTLY with the characters.

Redneck K: Check.

J the Whippersnapper: Check.

Zed the Unflappable: Check.

Morbid Coroner L: Er, the movie did change the character, didn't it?

Anyway:

Humor: Check... Double check. Planet Vampiria? To Be Used In Case Of Armaggedon? (Not that H'ar Megiddo was involved, much less Revalations, but still...) K in Hawaian shirt and shorts... oh, dear I just snorted hot cocoa all over my computer through my nose.

Plot: Checky! Although, why DID it stop working, or am I just kinda dumb...

General Story Kickassery: Checkiness squared!

Glad you enjoyed it. The idea just came to me while I was watching the movie. The cartoon that came out later was very good and really filled out the personalities of the characters. As to why the neuralizer didn't work, wweellll, let's just say that it involved all of Xander's possessions and the fact that they don't like outside influences (unless they are female). I may add to this thing later if the right inspiration hits me but I've got too many plot tribbles going on right now as it is. Yes, I said tribbles. Reasoning - bunnies don't multiply fast enough for some of my ideas. Heck, I don't even bother writting them down. If I did, I'd never get anything done.

On an unrelated note - if you like Valdemar stories, you need to read mine on Fanfiction.net. It's a Buffy/ Valdemar cross that I can't post on this site. It's called 'The Knight's Companion'.

Next note - you should have Galen use the term 'ashke' sometime. Comes from 'The Last Herald Mage' trilogy and means 'beloved'. Of course, you probably knew that.

Great story!

You have all the characters down perfectly!

Can I interest you in a something in a sequel?

thanks for putting a smile on my face
:)

Glad to be of service. It was my pleasure.

sweet

ROFLMAO

I can see a sequel ;)

lol ... love it. More?

I liked it! And the MIB guys getting a memory wipe was quite poetic.

oh i LOVE it! *hugs you* that is great... so funny to see them flashed back. *snickers*

LOL! That about says it all.

Rotflol! Hey it is only fair, they are always messing with other people's memories now it is their turn. (giggle) MD.

OMG!!! This was great!!! LOVED IT! So totally going on my recs!

keep penning,
Marns
~pN

LOL! Before they are infecting people? Few thousand years to late. Hmmm! Maybe the mayor got hold of a 'flashy-thingie', might explain the Sunnydale effect.

Great little story. Funny though, I didn't even know there was an MIB cartoon. lol. (I guess that shows my age a bit.) I do remember sitting in the front row of my local theatre to watch the original movie, and have to say the characters are very on with the movies as well. Great job.

Like it very much and would like to see other random encounters between the two groups. Kinda like a situation where they are both booked for the impending armageddon or some such. Would be fun. Just dear god keep it light and fluffy as that is the best way these two work together. Serious is okay, but considering both have comedic roots it is for the best. Maybe have J get interested in Rona and show up at the Slayer house for a date and Xander give him his Shovel talk.

Don't know, but really did enjoy the idea. Thanks.