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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
This was fabulous and pretty much how I would imagine something like this going. While MIB may have their gizmos, Willow can cheat by ignoring the laws of physics and reality. Lovely. Thank you for writing.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Oh so very chuckle-worthy!
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kieranfoy
Review:
Wow. Just... wow.

Never read the cartoons, but it seemed to fit EXACTLY with the characters.

Redneck K: Check.

J the Whippersnapper: Check.

Zed the Unflappable: Check.

Morbid Coroner L: Er, the movie did change the character, didn't it?

Anyway:

Humor: Check... Double check. Planet Vampiria? To Be Used In Case Of Armaggedon? (Not that H'ar Megiddo was involved, much less Revalations, but still...) K in Hawaian shirt and shorts... oh, dear I just snorted hot cocoa all over my computer through my nose.

Plot: Checky! Although, why DID it stop working, or am I just kinda dumb...

General Story Kickassery: Checkiness squared!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. The idea just came to me while I was watching the movie. The cartoon that came out later was very good and really filled out the personalities of the characters. As to why the neuralizer didn't work, wweellll, let's just say that it involved all of Xander's possessions and the fact that they don't like outside influences (unless they are female). I may add to this thing later if the right inspiration hits me but I've got too many plot tribbles going on right now as it is. Yes, I said tribbles. Reasoning - bunnies don't multiply fast enough for some of my ideas. Heck, I don't even bother writting them down. If I did, I'd never get anything done.

On an unrelated note - if you like Valdemar stories, you need to read mine on Fanfiction.net. It's a Buffy/ Valdemar cross that I can't post on this site. It's called 'The Knight's Companion'.

Next note - you should have Galen use the term 'ashke' sometime. Comes from 'The Last Herald Mage' trilogy and means 'beloved'. Of course, you probably knew that.
Review By [Kieranfoy] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Great story!

You have all the characters down perfectly!

Can I interest you in a something in a sequel?
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
thanks for putting a smile on my face
:)
Comments from author:
Glad to be of service. It was my pleasure.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chaoskitten
Review:
ROFLMAO

I can see a sequel ;)
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Izabela
Review:
lol ... love it. More?
Review By [Izabela] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I liked it! And the MIB guys getting a memory wipe was quite poetic.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slmncpm
Review:
oh i LOVE it! *hugs you* that is great... so funny to see them flashed back. *snickers*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL! That about says it all.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MistDragon
Review:
Rotflol! Hey it is only fair, they are always messing with other people's memories now it is their turn. (giggle) MD.
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bumpkin
Review:
OMG!!! This was great!!! LOVED IT! So totally going on my recs!

keep penning,
Marns
~pN
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
LOL! Before they are infecting people? Few thousand years to late. Hmmm! Maybe the mayor got hold of a 'flashy-thingie', might explain the Sunnydale effect.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scrappychic
Review:
Great little story. Funny though, I didn't even know there was an MIB cartoon. lol. (I guess that shows my age a bit.) I do remember sitting in the front row of my local theatre to watch the original movie, and have to say the characters are very on with the movies as well. Great job.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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