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Review of chapter "Craft Users Wanted" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Very cool x-over!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [20 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Craft Users Wanted" from Knight
Review:
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
Review By [Knight] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Craft Users Wanted" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Craft Users Wanted" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Interesting idea. Was just thinking the other day that a 'Witch Hunter Robin' (WHR) crossover would be fun to write (though not in quite the way you are doing it). Unfortunately, I think you have a few problems to overcome first.

(1) You desperately need an English speaking beta reader
(2) Who is Ariel and when did Xander start doing magic ? You need to give us some background for this to work.
(3) What brings Willow/Xander/Ariel to Japan to work with STN (The government organization Robin works for)
(4) You need to give a little background on Robin & company. If you are writing from their POV it might help to know who they are instead of assuming everyone has seen all 26 episodes of the anime.
(5) Magic users in WHR are closer to 'Harry Potter' wizards than they are to Buffy wiccan style magic (as praticed by Willow) (In WHR it's a genetic thing...) so you need to reconcile that in some way.
(6) Your fic is more plot than actual story. You need to fill in the white space between.
(7) Is this totally AU or does it fit into some Buffy season ?

It needs work but does have potential.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Aug 03] • Not Rated
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