Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from
MwhahahahaReview:
I really hope you come back to this soon...its really good and I can't wait to read more of it!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words. I will come back to it, it's just life keeps getting in the way.
Review By [
Mwhahahaha] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
DoubleKrossReview:
Extremely confusing. Your scenes skip around a lot, your characters run the emotional gauntlet way too quickly, and the spelling, grammar, and formatting mistakes make it annoying to read. I would suggest a beta reader.
Review By [
DoubleKross] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Good story so far
Comments from author:
thank you.
Review By [
AriaDragoncrest] • Date [26 May 09] • Not Rated