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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
I wish there was a sequel. I want to read some more. I think it's a good decision to let the Council take over. They won't interfere when not necessary and they aren't power-hungry. They will keep an eye on it but let the things how it is because it's already running by good people. Who knows what they are doing.

Buffy and the others curious as they are want to go to other world to explore and maybe train several Slayers to get along with the soldiers as safety belt. Which should be good.

I want to read how Buffy, Dawn and Willow will get along with the military. Teal'c would love to spar with Buffy.

I want to read how they take Senator Kingsley down.

Wish you start writing again and make a sequel.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alkeni
Review:
The Watchers Council isn't F*cking designed to fight the goa'uld. That's possibly the most inane decision anyone could make.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
cute!! After 3 yr's i still hope to see more!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from McGurrin
Review:
I like it and hope to see this story continued as mentioned possible soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Maybe?
Review By [McGurrin] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
awesome way of handling the situation ^__^
Comments from author:
Thanks. Maybe one day I will get the sequel written?
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [25 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
That was kinda mean to Davis but perfectly done! I'd love to see this turn into the story it has the makings for. It's great as a one-shot but it really feels like just the start of a full length story to me. Love to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I have had a couple of ideas for a sequel but at this time I do not feel the urge to do any thing about it! Maybe when my family problems settle down?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
This needs a sequel
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
Review:
So very damn good. Terrific.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [13 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
Review:
I always get such a kick outta seeing kinsey put in his place.

and, poor paul davis, I feel sorry for the man, that was just cruel at the end.
Comments from author:
Thanks I like being evil! But hay a Presidential citation is something for your family to remember your sacrifice.
Review By [Raider] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alexceasar
Review:
Poor Paul. I knew him well. *shakes head* Jack is going o be rabid for a little bit. I absolutely love the idea of the Council taking over command of the SGC. They will be able to bring in more support from other countries I think with their contacts. Also love the idea of the Summers girls being Hammond's granddaughters. I look forward to reading more from this verse. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thanks. maybe one day I can add to this but if in the meantime anyone else wished to add to the verse I would not mind.

The Council taking over something like the Stargate I think would make more sense in a crossover verse than those idiots at the IOA.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
How very delightful to read-ha, ha!!! "Twould be great to read more of this vein of story line.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have been thinking about it but at the moment I have so many stories out that need updating that I do not feel it would be such a good idea to add to them.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluejello
Review:
*snickers* Poor Major Davis...
Comments from author:
Yes. To tell the truth that was not how I was going to end it but the idea just popped into my head.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grouchie
Review:
only thing to be said please write more great story I would love to more of what Jack are
Comments from author:
The original idea was a straight up story but then I decided it would be a series of one offs i.e. a second one my be set months later!

Whatever happens I have not even come up with a idea yet so I cannot promise when it will be posted.
Review By [grouchie] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
That was very enjoyable. how did Jack know Buffy and Dawn?
Comments from author:
Thanks. In one episode Jack visited General Hammond at home and it was obvious that Hammond's granddaughters knew him so as Buffy and Dawn were his older granddaughters in this story I just extended the knowledge to them.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orion
Review:
Nice. It's not the first "Stargate goes to the Watchers' Council" i've read, but it is one of the better ones, and possibly the only one that diverges from that particular meeting.

I wouldn't mind reading more in this universe.
Comments from author:
Thanks. To me the Discloser episode seems the most logical crossover possibility.
Review By [Orion] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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