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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
Review:
Love this start.
Hoping this will prompt a continuation... go on you know you want too...
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MistDragon
Review:
My only complaint is that it is too short! I would love to see this continued. MD.
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Damia
Review:
That is SO Xander.
Review By [Damia] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Cool.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from windlg
Review:
cute
Review By [windlg] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Oh, that's great! I'd love to see more of this line. I can see Xander still going out to 'patrol.' More please? Pretty, pretty please?

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [5 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart
Review:
Oh boy. I would have liked to see the reaction of the team to that annoucement.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mieka
Review:
fabulous!!!! I LOVE Criminal Minds!

Can't wait to read more!
Review By [Mieka] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from limejuize
Review:
Ok now I am hooked! Please update soon!!
Review By [limejuize] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ladeia
Review:
I like the start of this... just not long enough. Would like to see where you take this. :)
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tals
Review:
Lovely beginning. I like how Xander keeps interjection these small comments when lawyer-guy is talking. I'll be keeping an eye on this one, to see where you are taking it.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cmdruhura
Review:
If Jason didn't see that one coming he should go back to detective school. In fact the whole team should if they didn't either.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from theunixer
Review:
I have to give it a 9 instead of a 10 because before Buffy ran away, Xander was 17 for well over half a year (more like 3/4 of a year or more). He was nearing 18 that summer.

Of course, with Xander having no income of his own, he most likely would be unable to gain emancipated minor status at first. Unless Giles (and maybe Joyce) is working on it and offers him a place to live, that is. This story could occur in the interim before the State agrees and Xander would most likely have turned 18 by then anyway, bureaucracy being what it is.

Something to think about.

Well, on with the story, which sounds intriguing. Xander does, after all, have an insight into people, which would be of great help to the team. He just has to be there at the right time to see ("The one who sees" after all) something the others miss or don't get as quick as he does. He would have to overcome their scepticism of him because of his age (subplot here?) and general goofiness (which he completely never lost, even through the last episode of the canonverse).
Review By [theunixer] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Time scale is interesting... but if you follow the idea that a television show about a "real" person like Gideon might be "reporting" on events a few years in the past... well... yes... please continue. But also please define the time frame. Thanks for sharing. An interesting idea, but not exactly sure if Xander would end up as a summer intern at 16... maybe they could work on him getting emancipatged minor status.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scrappychic
Review:
Ohh very interesting. I can't wait to see more.
I've always wanted to write a Criminal Minds Xover, but can't write the profiling stuff at all so I've stayed away from it. This looks promising, especially since Gideon is still on the team. It's just not the same since Mandy Patinkin left the show. I'm picturing a scene with Gideon and Xander bonding over some Father-son time watching "The Princess Bride" together. lol. (just kidding)
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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