Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from Genuka
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Nice mix. I look forward to seeing what else you do with this.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [9 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from Hawklan
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Chapter 5: Lineage of Powers
AHH the Fates are in Play now and we have a Jedi in the game.....
Chapter 6: Home Base 2
Nice work Rommy did on Homebase 2, but why Asgard as Enemies? Goa'uld I could understand and now we have Faith in the story *g*.
Review By [Hawklan] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from sunamee
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Another great update. I look forward to seeing the next one. Looks like Xander in this story is closer to having his own ship than your Master of Forbidden Seal story.
I like both stories and hope you will continue to update both.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from CrystalBlaze
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I'm not surprised that Rommie regards the Materia as semi-sentient.
Materia are solidifcations of the power of the Lifestream. This is why tuned Mako reactors made starters for utility Materia while unique ones came about in distant parts of the Final Fantasy Seven world.
The Lifestream being the river of souls and essence of life, any concentration of its energies would have a life of its own, however static in form.
One does, naturally, wonder exactly what Rommie made of a bar with a "terrorist" hideout in the basement..
Comments from author:
:D yeah I always thought Materia are semi alive since they are created from the life stream. :p As for 7th Heaven? well that depends on which 7th Heaven is in the home base 2. During the FFVII timeline, 7th Heaven was a "terrorist" hideout, I am not sure if Tiffa and the other's still store wepaons and bombs in the bar after the events of Final Fantasy Advert Children though. I was under the impression that Tiffa started taking in orphans, so most likely she wouldn't be letting weapons lie around.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from Richardthrnnsx
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Nice to see another chapter. Thanks for sharing
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapter.
::Gives the plot bunny some Manchow soup::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# Professor Charles Xavier: [as Wolverine brings his lit cigar into the Cerebro chamber] Logan, my tolerance for your smoking in the mansion notwithstanding, continue smoking that in here and you'll spend the rest of your days under the belief that you're a six-year-old girl. Logan/Wolverine: You'd do that? Professor Charles Xavier: I'd have Jean braid your hair. Logan/Wolverine: [puts out the cigar on the palm of his own hand] - X2: X-Men United #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Comments from author:
:) nice to see you Dragonelf!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from dogbertcarroll
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Finally a story that doesn't feel the need to off Kendra so they can bring in Faith. I think a human Faith, even with some powers, will be a much more interesting character.
Comments from author:
yeah, I was coming up with ways to include Faith and maybe Vi + the other potentials into the storyline without killing the current Slayers. In the end this is the only way I could come up with. Two Slayers + a lot more Charmed Potentials, who might become Slayers one day :p Add in Xander, Buffy and Willow, this is going to end up with a very powerful Charmed Circle.
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from AlphaBeta
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Very nice update. Hope to see more soon! And keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
nice to see you again AlphaBeta :D
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from LordSia
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Cool, although I don't understand how Xander reintegrating his chaos magic-imprinted soulshards would effect people touching him. Makes no sense what so ever, except as a cheap plot device (it was caused by chaos magic that did it!) to spread the abilities...
Cool fic though. Good point about incompatible technology due to differences in the natural laws of the various universes.
I was a bit pissed that people forgave Buffy for almost killing them all though - they had warned her, they tried to warn her again, simple logic and common sense states "do not attempt to engage FTL in a pocket universe the size of a small city"... And if they had been lost, well, Xander might've lived on as a spirit even as Buffy, Cordelia and Giles were scattered throughout the Void Between Worlds, while Willow and Rommie would've died of old age, trapped in a pocket dimension with no way out...
Comments from author:
:p yeah it was a bit of a plot device, basically I try to explain it away as Xander's split up souls becoming an individual power, so when he integrate them, they generate a field of energy around him to change him. That's why other's near him are similarly affected... a bit lame :p but well it's just another of those plot devices I come up with to roll the story along. Otherwise, Xander will end up uber-power beside the rest of his powerless companions.
Yeah and the forgiving Buffy part, I figure that since this took place in Season 2, Xander's crush on Buffy might caused him to give her some leeway, though Giles and Cordelia might be the only ones a bit hard on her, one being an adult, while the other tends to be blunt. Anyway thanks for your review :D
Review By [LordSia] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from Bobboky
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awesome
Comments from author:
thank you :D
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from wyrmlord
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love it!
Comments from author:
thank you!
Review By [wyrmlord] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from BlueEyedJedi
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It seems, you are building an army.
Peace
Comments from author:
something like that, more like an army of construction force. :D
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from Thedruid
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Another nice chapter, well done. My only complaint is that it's not a chapter of Master of the Forbidden Seals :).
Comments from author:
:p working on it, having a bit of a problem writing the new MFS chapter actually. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from Morgomir
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Fantastic story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
thank you!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Home Base 2" from thsunami
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It looks great, the story gets better and better. And it looks like war is coming between good and evil
Comments from author:
:) thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [thsunami] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated