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Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Harry
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Evidently Dawn has been adopted in a sense by the Jeffersonian team. Now, the question is, how is this going to pan out for her.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Harry
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Well, you promised us a case that Dawn would be on from start to finish, and this is the beginnings of it. Time to see if this time with Xander has truly done her any good, that will show up in her work.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Harry
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LOL! Well, thats one way to take care of the argument! Now, its off to work for Dawn, while Xander relaxes around the house.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Harry
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Sounds like what the psychiatrist suggested Dawn do, backfired on everyone involved. And that is not good for Dawn or Xander. While it needed to be done, it caused more harm than good for both parties.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Harry
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Sounds to me like SOMEONE knows more about Sunnydale than they are letting on! And if that is the case, then everything that Buffy and the others have built up over the years might fall apart!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Harry
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Xander, WHY did you have to show up and ruin the way things were going for Dawn? She was working things out and YOU had to come and ruin it by dropping information about her past that she did NOT want to share! Do you have a death wish or something?
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Harry
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Another panic attack by Dawn, and this time, on the father of one of her co workers. Girl is REALLY going to have to try and work this out.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Harry
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Oh God! Dawn got drunk and did all THAT! No wonder she wants that to disappear!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Harry
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Daisy, thy name is MUD where Dawn is concerned! You go up against her, you are going to find yourself on the WRONG end of a intelligence scan! You had best work on double and triple checking your protocols before you do something like this again.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Harry
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Well, the council shrink is making some progress with Dawn. At least we got to know some of what Dawn went through at Darfur, and her reaction to Xander finding her. But there is still a lot that needs to be worked out. And that is going to take time.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Harry
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A night out with the gang? Could be nice, if Dawn was paying more attention to it.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Harry
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Well, it looks like what Dawn went through is still bothering her. I do hope that Booth's talking with Dawn helps. Both being survivors of incidents might give them a chance to talk and help Dawn out in a way that a doctor might not be able to.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
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Sounds like Dawn is trying to deal with her past in her own way. But, I don't know if its working or not. At least, she is earning the respect of her peers at work.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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Dawn seems to be making some headway at her work place. Now, lets see how long it is before her background, or what happened in Darfur comes back to bite her.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Harry
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The incident in Darfur is only part of what has made Dawn this way. Her experiences in Sunnydale caused a good deal of this as well. If they ever got the full details, Booth would be heading for LA for a sitdown with Angel! And after that, A LONG session with Buffy!!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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