I have to say say that this is going to be a GREAT story!!! Definately love the spin on the Dawn and Cole as siblings, very unique. And the fact that the Cullens think Dawn is normal definately leaves alot of fun plot twists there. Hope to see another update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, its not Dawn its Bella btw. I have another chapter posted under the same penname on FF.net. Im trying to get my word count up for Buffy xovers atm.
Review By [dawnieelf] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Interesting take. Should be fun to see how this situation turns out.
One question: Alice's visions have a hard time with the werewolves, because they're beyond human beings. How will she handle a demon?
Comments from author:
I'm working on the next chapter. Alice's visions will be what bella wants them to be, her power is to get into people's heads and manipulate what they see- this is what she will do for herself and Cole's 'future'.
Review By [rylanaj] • Date [10 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Oooo...I'm intrigued! Never really read this type of crossover till now and I gotta say I'm enjoying it way more then I expected to. Bella and Cole as siblings is a pretty unique storyline. I'm eager to see how demon Bella will interact with the Cullens, and if she'll get a kick of Edward torturing himself bout' how delicate he thinks she is! lol! Can't wait for more insite into demony Bella, hope to read more very soon!
Comments from author:
I have another chapter posted under the same penname on FF.net. Im trying to get my word count up for Buffy xovers atm.
Review By [pensivegal] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
very nice, awaiting the next installment. I do hope Bella doesn't go all goo-goo eyed over Edward--especially her being who she is. I think she'd put up more of a fight. She is not a teenybopper. Ah well, can't wait to see how you mess with Edward--hehe, maybe she can show up carlisle-oh can't wait. please please update soon.
Comments from author:
Bella won't be all goo-goo-eyed over Edward, however since this will be BellaxEdward she will begin to have stronger feelings towards him at the end/middle of this fic. I don't know when I'll be updating as I have an exam next week so i will be cutting down on fanfiction time and doing more revision, I am hoping to post one chapter at least every month...
Review By [Serenity] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Definitly not the innocent Bella from the movie(haven't read the book yet). Will any of the CUllen's be able to tell she's part demon?
Comments from author:
Bella is definatly not innocent and while she will not be totally like the Bella from the book she will be playing that part...however the Cullen's can't tell if she is a demon...but they will begin to notice things about her...
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Joyful
