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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Listener
A nice, melancholy story that was somewhat interrupted by the spirit thingy and having to deal with it. I found that whole part to be a bit distracting. However, I do think you did the grief and conflicted emotions really well -- "Tara's dead and I want bacon", etc.

I also particularly enjoyed the line about "potential toast".
Comments from author:
Well thank you very much! I am sorry that you felt the spirit to be too distracting. I was trying to show that Willow still had something positive to contribute, despite what she may be thinking at the time.

I am still very happy you found I demonstrated her grief and emotions well as I thought that was the hardest to do. And I liked the potential toast too. Thank you again for taking time to read and review.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DofEire
That. Was. AWESOME.
Comments from author:
Thanks for that. I really appreciate it. You should have seen the less awesome versions of this story. Ugh! Rewrite, after rewrite. And the angst! Such miserable, out of control, angst! I really hope I was able to balance that out, as I've had issues with doing so in the past. Again, thank you for taking the time to read my story and reviewing it!
Review By [DofEire] • Date [6 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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