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Review of chapter "Dating Interruptions" from DarthTenebrus
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Really, that sodding berk Lindsey doesn't get when no means no, does he?

But at least Spike has a body again, he's going steady with Vala Mal Doran, maybe even shagging her at some point in the near future, and he's recently saved not merely a city, but a whole planet...what's not to enjoy about his unlife right now? Oh yeah. ..by technological means, he can even go out in the daylight! If I were him, I'd be in Type O heaven!
Comments from author:
You know how it is when you have a definite plan; it's hard to accept that things haven't worked out the way you were sure they would when something unexpected happens.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayer's Loss" from DarthTenebrus
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Elgin does war scenes quite well...and I feel for that universe's Buffy about as much as you might feel for her in "Rise Dark Sisters"...I turned her into a Vader-style cyborg in that one, complete with all the trauma and horror that comes with the package. She loses all of her limbs, her eyes and ears, and her ability to speak is altered by the installment of a vocoder in the helmeted mask she has to wear as part of her cybernetic suit which doubles as an environment suit.

Edit/Reply: I take it you read the story? If yes, then how was it and what are your thoughts as to how Buffy's cybernetic transformation in your story compares to the process in mine?
Comments from author:
Isn't there such a thing as inflicting TOO much trauma on someone?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kindness, Wisdom, and Faith" from DarthTenebrus
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Well, he's a right arrogant git, Ba'al is...

And when are the others going to clue in that Spike opened that portcullis?
Comments from author:
He didn't open it; as part of the trials to open the Sangraal, that portcullis would have opened whenever everyone involved in the quest was touching it while trying to help that kid, and the fact that Spike was the last person to make contact means nothing.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [13 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Vampire Met Orici" from DarthTenebrus
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Got only one thing to say in regards to Spike "of the Tau'ri"...

Bloody good on you, mate!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tales from the DRI" from DarthTenebrus
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Nice setup going here in the first act. I like how you've played up the factor of diving headlong into the unknown with Spike's "condition", and apart from that, everything I'm familiar with in SG-1 has adhered pretty much to canon.

The mystery is Vala Mal Doran. Was she always this horny in canon or is it just a fanfic twist on your part?
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it; this story started out as an idle idea, but it's turned into one of my favourite projects.

I may have exaggerated some of her moments for humorous effect, but she was certainly a bit of a flirt.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ending a War" from raxadian
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Meh, the only reason Spike would have to visit Angel would be to brag, but he can't cause the whole thing is a secret. Would be way better if I dunno, Spike went to Atlantis with Carter and Vala? After all Carter ended being part of the Atlantis team. And Vala would go cause Spike is going.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ending a War" from raxadian
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Meh, the only reason Spike would have to visit Angel would be to brag, but he can't cause the whole thing is a secret. Would be way better if I dunno, Spike went to Atlantis with Carter and Vala? After all Carter ended being part of the Atlantis team. And Vala would go cause Spike is going.
Comments from author:
There are one or two details he needs to straighten out...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Completing the Sangraal" from raxadian
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Is a shame Ghost Spike won't be able to punch Ori Jesus again.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Brief History of Magic" from raxadian
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Well, so Magic is just Earth bound unless you have Naquadah around?
Comments from author:
Basically, yeah.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Prior Archaeologist" from raxadian
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Like in the original timeline, is too risky to do what he is asking.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Suns of Other Worlds" from raxadian
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What shocking discovery? Danny boy is alive and a Priest?
Comments from author:
The Priors are a bit more than just priests; look it up.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Science of Vampires" from raxadian
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Yes, teasing her about Daniel with him being captured would by the enemy be mean.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dating Interruptions" from raxadian
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Yeah, is not like Spike role in Angel was that big anyway.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back Over the Bridge" from raxadian
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What he doesn't know is that Spike already has a purpose, save the world? He is already saving the Galaxy.
Comments from author:
Lindsey's main problem; he doesn't know what they really do in Cheyenne Mountain so he doesn't know how best to win Spike over.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Political Debates" from raxadian
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Yes, charades sounds good.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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