Review of chapter "Diagon and Knockturn Alley How Quaint" from
ValkyrieReview:
I'll keep reading.
You may want to include some form of background as to how "Manny" or Plagueis actually arrived on earth. You're rather jumping into the deep end straight off and it makes me feel like I've missed something.
Review By [
Valkyrie] • Date [9 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
TheLaughingManReview:
I like it.
Review By [
TheLaughingMan] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DragonelfReview:
I am looking forward to see where you will take this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
AscendedWarriorReview:
A rather interesting take on the Starwars timeline, and that of Harry potter. The only real improvement I can think of for this story would be longer chapters... but as is, it is quite good.
Review By [
AscendedWarrior] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
