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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from leelaa
Review:
Damn good so far. But it's been so so SO LONG since an update. I've been checking in on this story for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... It's too good to be abandoned, & I'm scared that you seem to have utterly done just that. Please don't do that. Coax the muses back out of hiding and update soon. Please.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [13 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from thesithspawn
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Great beginning you have here:) Please say you have more ?
The evil that's arrived...it wouldn't happen to be Sylar?
Review By [thesithspawn] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ArthurHansen
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Very nice! A slightly different take on things with Clare not being immediately integrated into the group.
Review By [ArthurHansen] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Crydwyn
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I wonder who or what is scaring the vampires? I'm guessing mutant just because it seems like a sensible twist with Claire being there. Definitely looking forward to your next update!
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)James
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Very well done.

I'm wondering if the new danger is the vamp that has Claire's blood???

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from angelus
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hmm wondering what it is that scares vampires maybe Sylar if he can acquire heroes abilitys why not vampires and just how scary is that idea *shudders* lol
Review By [angelus] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
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Sylar, maybe? Acquiring vamp strength/abilities? Funny--if Clare is seen by the scoobies healing something, they might conclude she's a demon of some sort.... hm, she's not dating Xander, so it's not definite....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
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I am finding your story to be nifty-neato. I like Claire finally becoming one of the Scoobies. I look forward to seeing how having Invulnerable Girl helping out changes the Standard Buffyverse. And I look forward to Claire's dad becoming involved. Will Claire bring Buffy back to life after the Master killing her by giving Buffy some of her blood? And if so, how will Claire's blood effect a Slayer? I am getting very enthusiast about your story. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TaleWeaver
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I'm really enjoying this so far, you have a good grasp of the character dynamics of the season 1 scooby gang. And of course Claire would want to be part of it, given how desperately she was looking for a purpose in Hs2. You've also come up with some flashes of near-brilliance here: 1) Giles mistaking Claire for Buffy, and letting out the secret - simple, absolutely natural, and getting straight to the point.
2) Claire's becoming Buffy's new punching bag - she'd be able to take it better than anyone else, and Claire would love to learn self defense
3) Claire's scent being so irresistable - wonder what happened to that vamp that bit her? What effect would her blood have on vampires, poison or a new drug maybe? It couldn't turn them human, because buffyverse vampirism has a mystical origin, and Claire's ability is strictly biological
4) HRG not letting Claire out at night leaving her out of a lot of the Scooby Gang's adventures - saves you having to re-write most of the season!
I do have some questions, though, and I've thought of some potental pitfalls - you may have thought of this already, but just in case. 1) when specifically is this set? I ask primarily because of 'the puppet show'; HRG's likely to move the family out of Sunnydale as soon as he hears 'the top of his head was missing'. Also, this seems to be post-'Angel', but Xander in 'the pack' would have also noticed the difference in Claire's scent... did he just not want to say anything, not wanting to blow his amnesia claim?
2) the situations that the Scoobies get into will lead to Claire getting seriously hurt in short order ('I robot, you jane' 'nightmares' and 'invisible girl' all take place mostly in the daytime, so Claire can go along) so how's she going to cover? IS she going to cover?
3) if HRG winds up with knowledge of the bump in the night world (and given how sharp he is, it's likely, though the state of denial that the population exists in might keep him from actually being able to obtain information), how will he react to the Hellmouth giving people metahuman-like abilities, such as invisibility (Marcie Ross and Claude) or dream-walking (Billy from 'Nightmares' and that little boy Mohinder met when he took his father's ashes back to India and first learned about Shanti)? I think he'd find it fascinating. I can just see him and Giles comparing notes in the library, and Ripper is one of the few people who'd barely blink at HRG's past work (remember what happened to Ben at the end of B s5?).
4) if this is Sylar scaring all the vamps (and he'd be one of the few things to do it) how will vampire brains/blood affect him? (remember 'Earshot'?)
5) will Claire get back in touch with Nathan at all, or any of the other Heroes? And will she mention Peter at all, given how worried she was about him at the start of Hs2, and if Sylar's around he's naturally going to come to mind.
6) Claire might not actually know about Adam and how long he's lived, but shes's too smart not to have wondered at the implications of her ability in relation to her lifespan - now that she knows someone who can theoretically live forever, is she going to seek out Angel for a deep and meaningful discussion about immortality? Angel would probably need to wear a swimmer's nose-clip to block her scent, but there's some potential for real insight into Claire's situation, and how vampires stay under the radar in modern times.
Review By [TaleWeaver] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Dre
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Cue the music! The boogeyman's coming...

Hee. I can't wait.
Review By [Dre] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tatsu
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hehehehehe i can only wonder what kinds of effects her blood would have on those leaches. Great start.
Review By [Tatsu] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Caminus
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Nifty idea. Keep going please!
Review By [Caminus] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
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ok, you have my attention.

Now, was there something in the blood???

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
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one has to wonder what would happen if Sylar tried to 'extract the power' from a vampire or demon...or a witch or a slayer....inquiring minds want to know!
Claire should now be able to figure out it was probably a vampire that went after her...and might recall Giles & his book?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dre
Review:
Great start. It's been a while seen I've read a really good Heroes crossover and I have a feeling that this is going to be really good...
Review By [Dre] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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