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Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from dhcalva
Review:
Great Story!
Review By [dhcalva] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
This is an amazing story; I was completely drawn into your style and descriptions.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
This story was amusing from the beginning- all that talk about making sure that the citizens of Bath don’t break rule number one alone was PRICELESS-, but it’s the sheer DEPTH of the plot you’ve created here that proves truly inspirational.

The sheer scale of the legends you’ve created here was exceptional, and the new characters seem like a very interesting bunch so far; I look forward to seeing how things develop from this point onwards.

Keep up the EXCEPTIONAL work; I look forward to seeing how things go as Willow and Giles learn more about their new world and capabilities.
Comments from author:
Thank you for kind words and encouraging feedback. I hope you've found part two, and that it lived up to expectations. :-)

I'm working on Part three. Along with my thesis, and a couple of other things ...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from deathgeonous
Review:
This was brilliant. Thanks for writing this, bye for now. Sequel HO!!!
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [3 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from (Past Donor)Deerskin
Review:
I love, love, love this story. A very original spin on the cross-over theme. The Willow and Giles interaction is absolutely spot on. I laughed a lot reading this fic. But I was also caught up in the action of the story. A great mix of humor and action is what made the TV show so great. I think you faithfully translated that into this story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope you enjoy chapter two as much as you did this one.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deerskin] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from Wormbait
Review:
Absolutely excellent.

Just re-read it, though I probably shoudn't have, as now I have a craving for the next Chapter and no idea how long the wait will be.

Very well done and I really hope your muses let you write more soon.
Comments from author:
Working on Chapter two, which is close to 14.000 words already ... so watch this space!
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from Ansku
Review:
Most intriguing and beautifully written :) I'm looking forward to the next part!
Review By [Ansku] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from WebSpyder
Review:
Your writing style is quite enjoyable. I was amazed at how well you wove the description of your campaign world into the story without it being obtrusive or overbearing. My only complaint would be that I was, as this was marked complete, expecting a story that was at least complete unto itself, even if it is to be part of a larger body of work. I'm not one for reading partially complete stories as I abhor waiting for further chapters to come out (Tabula Avatar!). Even so, this was a joy to read and I very much look forward to the additional chapters.
Review By [WebSpyder] • Date [12 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
Excellent! I do hope you post more of the wonderful tale soon!

'lucidity
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from MacShimi
Review:
This is a solid beginning to your story; I like your set-up. With luck the plot will be worthy of the hook you have set thus far. I eagerly await further chapters, and particularly seeing this new world through the eyes of its newest inhabitants.

Keep up the good work,

MacShimi
Review By [MacShimi] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from amusewithaview
Review:
0_0

I heart this.
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from RafMereC
Review:
Great story.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from grd
Review:
Your tale has the makings of a saga. There is much potential here and your prose serves it well. Looking eagerly for chapter two. Eager to see what abilities Giles and Willow will have and to learn more about their companions and the world they are now in.
Review By [grd] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from JoeDineen
Review:
Wonderfull character interaction, I look forward to further chapters.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Part Eight" from arkeus
Review:
Yay!

Nice. And 23k chapters are just the right length XD
Review By [arkeus] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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