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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from msdarque
Review:
Quite an intriguing start, I'd very much like to read more. :)
Congrats and kudos!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spring
Review:
I like what you have so far, however, you do have several spelling errors in these first two chapters. Also why isn't Xander using the Internet to look for his family? More soon please
Review By [spring] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from lorwen
Review:
I like this.
Please continue.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from thundever
Review:
Great story, brilliant interactions poor Xander that's a lot to find out about in your dreams, please update soon.
Review By [thundever] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AllenPitt
Review:
interesting plot idea. Usually if he's related to someone it's throug the Halliwell line. Having be a Bennett but not a Halliwell is really neat. No powers of course (unless his mother was a witch, which is possible given that a demon apparently killed her --after all, why was she killed? and all that)---
So this would come as quite a shock to the charmed ones & family... they have a brother. One also wonders if the Book of Shadows has an entry on slayers... or if Willow should have gotten a whitelighter. (too much to hope that Tara might be one now)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting start.
I don't think anybody's done a "little half-brother Xander" to the sisters before.

Keep going!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kirallie
Review:
Good start. Keep going!! So how is he related to them?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Very interesting start!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
Short, so there's not a lot to go on but a good start and I'd like to see where you take it.

One question: you wrote "He had often dreamed of his adoptive parents coming to take him away"...did you mean his REAL parents coming to take him away? Why would he be living with the Harris' if he already had other adoptive parents?
Review By [neverwill] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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