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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Elleria
Review:
Sequel better be posted soon!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from sylvancat
Review:
I like the story so far, but I'm starting to get confused. The reason is nothing you've done deliberately, but a cumulative effect of all the assumptions I've had to make due to lost words in sentences.
Like "if it this demon" What is it- If this demon does something.. or if it is this demon..?
Honestly, there've been too many already, but I'm going to try to read the rest. If I can't, that's why.
:( Sorry.
Betas are easily available and can quickly fix the problem, if you just can't stand to read over your own prose yourself.
Review By [sylvancat] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Only Human (7/?)" from Elleria
Review:
More as soon as you can please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5d" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MinaLynn
Review:
Good start (I'm only on chapter one), I really enjoy stories were Xander is out on his own and not a Zeppo. I did want to point out something. I'm pretty sure that it should be Point Pleasant, West Virginia (...could easily see the difference between Sunnydale, California and Point Pleasant, Virginia.). As far as I know there isn't a Point Pleasant in VA and the Mothman legend is from WV. Thanks for sharing your work.
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [21 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5c" from Neverwillmobile
Review:
I hope we'll eventually get the whole story of what happened back in Sunnydale, but so far this story is really interesting.
Review By [Neverwillmobile] • Date [21 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5c" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5b" from Elleria
Review:
Update soon please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [16 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5b" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice addition. Darkman is really underused.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5b" from Archr
Review:
Nice. I have seen very few make that cross in a fanfic. First movie was pretty good, not sure about the others.

This is getting pretty interesting. Looking forward to more.

Great job.
Review By [Archr] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5a" from mayoi
Review:
come on, you know you want to write more ;)
Review By [mayoi] • Date [11 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5a" from Kirallie
Review:
As in Kate lockley from ANgel? What exactly did Xander do last time he was in LA?
Comments from author:
Some answers will be found in 5b. Also, at this point, a prequel is planned. Some will be found there too. Thanks for reading.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5a" from Elleria
Review:
Oo..update soon please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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