Sequel better be posted soon!

I like the story so far, but I'm starting to get confused. The reason is nothing you've done deliberately, but a cumulative effect of all the assumptions I've had to make due to lost words in sentences.
Like "if it this demon" What is it- If this demon does something.. or if it is this demon..?
Honestly, there've been too many already, but I'm going to try to read the rest. If I can't, that's why.
:( Sorry.
Betas are easily available and can quickly fix the problem, if you just can't stand to read over your own prose yourself.

Looking forward to the next bit.

More as soon as you can please!

Looking forward to the next bit.

Looking forward to the next bit.

Good start (I'm only on chapter one), I really enjoy stories were Xander is out on his own and not a Zeppo. I did want to point out something. I'm pretty sure that it should be Point Pleasant, West Virginia (...could easily see the difference between Sunnydale, California and Point Pleasant, Virginia.). As far as I know there isn't a Point Pleasant in VA and the Mothman legend is from WV. Thanks for sharing your work.

I hope we'll eventually get the whole story of what happened back in Sunnydale, but so far this story is really interesting.

Looking forward to the next bit.

Update soon please!

Nice addition. Darkman is really underused.

Nice. I have seen very few make that cross in a fanfic. First movie was pretty good, not sure about the others.

This is getting pretty interesting. Looking forward to more.

Great job.

come on, you know you want to write more ;)

As in Kate lockley from ANgel? What exactly did Xander do last time he was in LA?

Some answers will be found in 5b. Also, at this point, a prequel is planned. Some will be found there too. Thanks for reading.

Oo..update soon please!