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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from twlight
Review:
interesting
Review By [twlight] • Date [24 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I'm Dying" from Fayari
Review:
But tuberculosis was pretty easy to cure even in the nineties, right? I remember, because I had it when I was a kid. I took a few shots and some medication, and now I don't have it anymore.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [18 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from NuitTombee
Review:
I like it a lot and I'm hoping for more when you get around to it.

Thanks for writing.

-James
Review By [NuitTombee] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
Review:
I'm truly hoping that you'll return to this and add to the Continuing Adventures of 'Doc Holiday' Harris, Gentleman And (Sort Of) Hero From The Hellmouth.

I can just see him in a poker game against Alucard, for example, and winning a cure for his illness while driving Sir Integra and the Angel of Death completely bonkers when pays a visit to his poker buddy to settle up...

And the reactions of the Scoobies when he leaves town after saying goodbye to only Cordelia, Joyce, and Dawn...

And then they finally find out a month or so afterwards the reasons behind his leaving, which are not limited to his health - 'cause I can NOT see Doc Harris letting himself stay when a Slayer has betrayed everyone and everything for an unDead, gelled hair, walking dildo...
Review By [trongod] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DamianAzrael
Review:
Didn't say it was bad you just didn't clarify it in the fic so i was a thrown off. I think they would detain him the cops are always trying to pin something on Buffy i don't know why they wouldn't try and get one of her friends, besides i would bet that half the police force is a demon or something similar with the Mayor running things the way he is. *blink blink* I went back and reread chapter two how did i skip like two paragraphs where you explained the TB and stuff!!!?? oh wait i think that was when the dog walked across the computer while i went to the kitchen to get more pain meds. I came back in to see her sitting on the keyboard with her stuffed bear in her mouth wanting me to play with her. So Never mind it's all cleared up lol Love Cordy's last line too.
Comments from author:
Didn't mean to come off as snappish. I always enjoy constructive criticism, so thanks. Hm, I've done some editing and fixed a few typos. Honestly, I may have forgotten to put in the TB monologue and just re-inserted it or something similar. It gets difficult to keep track with it all since editing often bores me and I find myself stoned shortly thereafter. You may have missed it, but it's just as likely I forgot to put it in.
Review By [DamianAzrael] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DamianAzrael
Review:
*stares oddly at the fic* Okay first off they would have to know the results before he did so they would have quarantined him until his TB was treated and cured if it was active. It would take about 12 to 24 months is treated correctly if it was latent meaning not active which it doesn't sound like it is then he would be given drugs to keep it that way. TB is very contagious the second it showed up on the tests he would have been detained. Still good fic. I know with the chaos magic it would be a bit odd, but if he was given the same TB as Doc Holliday had it wouldn't even be the drug resistant strain just the original and thus highly treatable. Unless the damage done to Doc by the illness was transferred there wouldn't have been any damage to his lungs either so why is he thinking it's a death sentence is he basing his info about it on the old knowledge he received from Doc about TB?
Comments from author:
Detained in Sunnydale? Where the cops routinely ignore everything? He wouldn't have let them detain him. As for why he thinks TB is a death sentence is because it is in my story. Mutated by the Hellmouth or chaos magic or however you want, the bottom line is that it isn't contagious but it is deadly. Suspension of belief is called for. Besides, would you try to detain a person who regularly kills thing three to four times stronger than he is?
Review By [DamianAzrael] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MathiasBlue
Review:
Doooooode! Please tell me you're going to continue this and Slade too! This looks awesome and the Slade fic is too cool to die DX
Comments from author:
I'm working on the next chapter right now. Since I pulled a muscle in my back, there's not much else I can do for a few days.
Review By [MathiasBlue] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from FariaLyton
Review:
Oh come on! You can't leave me hanging! :P

Please tell me you'll eventually continue this.
Comments from author:
My muse is nearly dead on this one, but I'll try to add another chapy or two soon. I'm looking for a job right now, so I'm a bit busy trying to survive.
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LordSia
Review:
Hurry up and... Bwahahahaha!
Superb.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [31 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from chaosmancer
Review:
can't wait till you update it again
Comments from author:
Me either.
Review By [chaosmancer] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from KingDarius
Review:
good story so far. definitely different than most stories. hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
OMG! Cordy you BITCH! ROFLMAO! Of course I say that to my friend who has me on his will with a tidy sum for me when he croaks. LOL But damn! LOL
Comments from author:
That scene was based on a real life experience.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from rinv
Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Maybe.
Review By [rinv] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TnTornado
Review:
I really enjoyed this story, its got ideas that I haven't really seen before, and the way you wrote it was very good.

Giving Xander TB provided a new twist, and makes for a totally different storyline.

Keep up the writing,

TnTornado
Comments from author:
Tennessee Tornado? I'm from Tennessee myself, East Tennessee wwaaayyy back up in the hills. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story, if you like this then check out my other stories.
Review By [TnTornado] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Vilkath
Review:
Pretty new idea far as I've seen before. I have seen more then a few 'bad Halloween' or other side effects before but those usualy focus more on mental problems like horrible memories or contamination of the person's personalty or perhaps even horrible inhuman physical looks like one Gargoyle story I was reading.

The physical illness and death aspect is pretty new far as I can tell, sad in a way but could be worse. Not mention being the 'normal human' in the demon slaying game with no training or skills to really speak of could honestly say xanders life expectancy wasn't pretty low to begin with? The odds of Xander getting out the end of Buffy series with only losing an eye in canon was truely bucking the odds.
Comments from author:
Yeah, but knowing that your chances aren't good is one thing. Death looking you straight in the eye and giving a due date is a completely different thing.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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