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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
So are we before the very late episode where Murdock did his best "James Bond" / "Secret Agent" impersonation (with a back-up team) on a cruise ship? 1986? 1988? Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from RevDorothyL
Very cute idea, but needs a whole lot of proof-reading, still, to catch all those mis-spellings and typos and punctuation problems.

However, I do hope you'll continue with the tale, so promisingly begun.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from eriktheviking
Very interesting crossover, but a few spelling errors.

Nightmare instead of nitemare
Vein - vain
Situation - cituation

Hopefully you can also explain some of the timeline differences.

Looking forward to how this develops.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Nice start
Too short, but a nice start
Of course how does the Captain know and not the Col?
Comments from author:
Cause he's a little bit mental. He's like a child in his mind at times and he's open to the world. The possiblities and that makes him sensitive to things. THings that go bump. Thump Bump.
And this is just how the muse wrote it out. This time not sure I had any say in this. Dang plot bunny.
Review By [LFW] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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