Okay, this is great and I really really enjoyed it. You did a great job of blending the (very different) worlds of Buffy, Sentinel, & Stargate. They mesh wonderfully and the characterization here is perfect. (PS: loved the Bewilder the British Guy game at the airport! and that Jack is a cranky ass with a heart of gold)
I would love to see more of this AU. Even if you ended this story right where it is (with Jon & Xan back in SunnyD) and started a new story arc that features the boys trying to figure out their bond & powers while fighting off vamps & demons. I'm sure Xander's rep as a crazy person won't help with Snyder or the other students. Also, with Harry Mayborne setting up the Initiative and spying on them could only bring new and interesting things. With him there instead of Maggie Walsh, I can't help but think that instead of ADAM, they will end up facing some crazy tech version of a Slayer, Sentinel, and Guide. *grins* Would be cool, especially with the Mayor's plans all coming active.
Please consider digging into this AU again. I love it muchly.
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Just re-read this. It's great and I love the way Jon and Xander interact in both stories and I really hope that you are able to write more soon. It may inspire my own writing.
Gotta say Jon has never been one of my favorite characters, I guess it is because I only like Jack when he is with Daniel and the team. Jon being a clone is Jack being even more immature, but I find the idea of him with Xander to be very interesting. I can see that Jon's life would be very lonely and Xander has been lacking a good male friend since Jesse.
I really like the x-over with Sentinel -- Jim and Blair are great Fanfic characters -- I think they would be good teachers/friends for the boys.
I can't wait to see how the next few years will be different with a Sentinel and Guide on the Hellmouth, let alone Harry Maybourne and the NID. I hope you plan to write more soon.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Not Rated
This whole sentinel thing is very interesting, and I like the growing Initiative angle as well. Hope you don't have Riley and the guys turn out "bad" in this version
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [11 Nov 09] • Not Rated
I've been following this story for a while and I love where it's going and how you've blended the three fandoms. Excellent work, please keep 'em coming!
Review By [LadyParadox] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
As long as neither one of them is in mortal danger, they should be okay, huh?
No wonder that started Giles cleaning his glasses, given the chances of that EVER being the case for more than a few days at a time on the hellmouth!
And neat insight about why Maybourne seemed to want to hang around Jack so much (apart from his one-time suggestion that they should team up and make a fortune doing black-ops for profit): less paperwork!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Love this wonderful chapter. I do have to agree with Giles' Oh my though about the two being in blessed protector mode. Xander and Jon living on the Hellmouth = full time blessed protector mode I fear. This is going to be interesting when the Inisitive starts up and the Scoobies find out, and I am sure that they will who started it in Sunnydale. As always I love this wonderful chapter and I eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I would presume that Jon will be able to persuade the Scoobies to start using modern weapons. With their new abilities, perhaps Kendra can be saved and you can have a trio of Slayers.
Please update more soon.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Not Rated