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Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from twlight
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This is a wonderful wonderful sequel so far. I do have to wonder how often Xander and Jon will go into blessed protector mode while living on the hellmouth. I really hope that the muse for this story starts being nice to you once again so that you can update this again soon.
Review By [twlight] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Scorpio
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Okay, this is great and I really really enjoyed it. You did a great job of blending the (very different) worlds of Buffy, Sentinel, & Stargate. They mesh wonderfully and the characterization here is perfect. (PS: loved the Bewilder the British Guy game at the airport! and that Jack is a cranky ass with a heart of gold)

I would love to see more of this AU. Even if you ended this story right where it is (with Jon & Xan back in SunnyD) and started a new story arc that features the boys trying to figure out their bond & powers while fighting off vamps & demons. I'm sure Xander's rep as a crazy person won't help with Snyder or the other students. Also, with Harry Mayborne setting up the Initiative and spying on them could only bring new and interesting things. With him there instead of Maggie Walsh, I can't help but think that instead of ADAM, they will end up facing some crazy tech version of a Slayer, Sentinel, and Guide. *grins* Would be cool, especially with the Mayor's plans all coming active.

Please consider digging into this AU again. I love it muchly.
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from sekmarc
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Still one of my favorite TS crossovers. I really hope it gets picked up again someday soon.
Review By [sekmarc] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from sekmarc
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Still one of my favorite TS crossovers. I really hope it gets picked up again someday soon.
Review By [sekmarc] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from DennSedai
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Please, please more... pretty please.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from LadyFoxFire
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Is this a dead fic?
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from minijo
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Just re-read this. It's great and I love the way Jon and Xander interact in both stories and I really hope that you are able to write more soon. It may inspire my own writing.
Review By [minijo] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from AXanFan
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Gotta say Jon has never been one of my favorite characters, I guess it is because I only like Jack when he is with Daniel and the team. Jon being a clone is Jack being even more immature, but I find the idea of him with Xander to be very interesting. I can see that Jon's life would be very lonely and Xander has been lacking a good male friend since Jesse.

I really like the x-over with Sentinel -- Jim and Blair are great Fanfic characters -- I think they would be good teachers/friends for the boys.

I can't wait to see how the next few years will be different with a Sentinel and Guide on the Hellmouth, let alone Harry Maybourne and the NID. I hope you plan to write more soon.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from LadySybyl
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I like where you've taken this story, it reads very well.

More, please?
Review By [LadySybyl] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from MissE
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Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [MissE] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Markelo
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Pretty good story! I like it!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from AlecMcDowell
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This whole sentinel thing is very interesting, and I like the growing Initiative angle as well. Hope you don't have Riley and the guys turn out "bad" in this version
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [11 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from LadyParadox
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I've been following this story for a while and I love where it's going and how you've blended the three fandoms. Excellent work, please keep 'em coming!
Review By [LadyParadox] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from RevDorothyL
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As long as neither one of them is in mortal danger, they should be okay, huh?

No wonder that started Giles cleaning his glasses, given the chances of that EVER being the case for more than a few days at a time on the hellmouth!

And neat insight about why Maybourne seemed to want to hang around Jack so much (apart from his one-time suggestion that they should team up and make a fortune doing black-ops for profit): less paperwork!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from spring
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Love this wonderful chapter. I do have to agree with Giles' Oh my though about the two being in blessed protector mode. Xander and Jon living on the Hellmouth = full time blessed protector mode I fear. This is going to be interesting when the Inisitive starts up and the Scoobies find out, and I am sure that they will who started it in Sunnydale. As always I love this wonderful chapter and I eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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