Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from jcon
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That was an excellent speech of Xander's defending Angel to Snape. Well written too. Could feel the tension in the room as I was reading the words. So glad that this story is continuing. Really enjoying it. Thankyou.
Review By [jcon] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from Genuka
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from msdarque
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Oh my, quite an exciting and intense chapter. I'm glad for the little progress that Xander and Angel made in their relationship. Eager to see the aftermath of Snape and Xander's lesson.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I loved that moment between Angel and Xander and how it helped Xander gain control of his magic. The showdown between him and Snape was excellent. I'm hoping that Xander and Angel will be able to have happiness without bringing out the demon. Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [severuswinchester] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from desartartt
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good plot, great characterizations. Harry and Draco's reaction to Faith is great.
Review By [desartartt] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from iamastory
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omg lolol i so love faith in this chapter!!! and go Xander! make the bad Snape see sense!!
Review By [iamastory] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from ChaosLady
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Neat.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from mendenbar
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Glad to see someone understands just what the Gypsies did to Liam. What had he ever done for them to hate him so? Go, Xander. Snape needed taking down a peg or twelve. Maybe something good will come of it.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17 - Lessons" from Elleria
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Love this! So happy to see an update. And love the bit with Faith at the end.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Reaching Out" from mendenbar
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Such an excellent re-read. Still hoping for an update soon.
Comments from author:
Glad you still enjoy it! Sorry for the delay, but I hope you like the new chapter!
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Reaching Out" from severuswinchester
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Excellent chapter! I liked the kissing scene, as well as the interaction between Severus, Minerva and Angel. The explanation for how Angel is able to walk in daylight, as well as Snape's role in it, was very well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! Yeah, the kissing scene is a favorite of mine, too. I'm always a fan of kissing. And pissing contests, which pretty much explains the scene between Snape, Angel, and Minerva. :)
Review By [severuswinchester] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Reaching Out" from msdarque
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Informative, great chapter. Poor Angel and Xander... I so wish for them to be together. Surely there has to be a way.. Eager to read more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! And don't worry about Angel and Xander. Their time is coming. ;)
Review By [msdarque] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Reaching Out" from jcon
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Not liking Dumbledore. But then again I'm in the middle of reading dark manipulative Dumbledore stories. Go through fads on them. Can Angel ever have a relationship without the angst? Poor Xander having to save the world (again) & the main player doesn't trust him. Is this the Watcher's Council all over again? They ruled their weapons & murdered them when they weren't compliant. Liking the story. Looking forward to further updates. Thankyou.
Comments from author:
You know, I'm getting that a lot about Dumbledore. Which is weird because I'm really not intending him to be evil. He's just so old, he's convinced he knows best, and he has this thing about individual people never being worth jeopardizing the greater good. Yeah, there are definite similarities between him and the Watcher's Council; I'd never really thought of it that way before. He's usually one of my favorite characters, even if that doesn't come through here.
So glad you are liking this, and thanks for reviewing!
Review By [jcon] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Reaching Out" from mendenbar
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Bits and pieces here and there (thanks for the sunproofing potion info) that will eventually come together in one heck of an explosion I suspect. They really need to find a way to bind Angel's soul so he and Xander can get together like they should be. I suspect such a binding will be an important development for the finale.
Comments from author:
You're right on track. Are you reading my mind? :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16 - Reaching Out" from Elleria
Review:
More soon please!
Comments from author:
Sorry for the delay, but I hope you continue to enjoy! Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]