Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Katrina
Nice! I truly enjoyed this. Thank you.
Review By [Katrina
] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Well plotted. I like this version of how Xander and Cordy hook up much better that Joss's.
Review By [ShyBob
] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lorwen
Review By [lorwen
] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Karone
I very much liked this story. Any chance for a sequel? Thanks.
Review By [Karone
] • Date [2 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shieldage
Cool. I think the painting-Joyce-Cordelia scene the morning after was my favorite part.
So Cordelia's a crack shot and they both should retain Chinese if they study? Sweet :D
So... Canon-Cordy's possessed by a Zoe look-alike, while yours is taken over by the real thing? Ha! :)
Good story, nice fallout... Thanks for not doing a rehash of the SpikevsBuffy-warehouse thing. :)
Nice job with Wash's internal monologue. Cordelia adapted nicely too - and good excuse used to get her to Ethan's :)
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
Is Buffy sure about that? Lol. I so enjoyed this story. It made me laugh and even cringe with Xander during his moments of uncertainty and panic. I enjoy the fact that even though this was one chapter, the progression was very clear cut. It doesn't leave me wanting more in the sense that it's incomplete but more in the sense of 'Hey, I SO wouldn't knock a sequal'. :-D I get the sense that Giles was Mal or is he just loving the drink? And it makes me wonder about the other costumes, yet I get this bit is complete. Am I making sense? Am sleepy and I'm rambling.
My favorite thing in this-other than the characterization-is the FRIENDSHIP! I love that suddently they're not all lovey and dovey. There was the avoidance, and then a slow progression of buddies. Of guns and plastic dino's. I always thought that Cordy and Xander had the ability to be good friends if they let each other, even after their break up.
Job really well done.
Review By [PrincessTai
] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluejello
Interesting take on the Halloween idea. I loved how you wrote the Xander/Cordelia-ness.
Review By [Bluejello
] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TnTornado
PLEASE tell me this is going to continue??? An awesome start, and it would be so cool to see how this could grow! Does Xanders skills crossover to flying current aircraft? Is he a worldclass car driver? What were they doing on the computer? So many questions!
Review By [TnTornado
] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Angelfirenze
This was absolutely beautiful. I loved this re-imagining of 'Halloween' even more than the canon version. And, even better, I never noticed parallels between post-Hellmouth!Cordelia and Zoe, but now they're visible, if not prominent. I wish there was a favoriting mechanism on this site so I could save this one, but I CAN save it to my hard drive. *glee*
Review By [Angelfirenze
] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MichelleWinchester
Very cool :)
I can easily 'see' Xander as Wash, as well as Cordelia as Zoe!!! :)
Though Mal & River are my favorite characters on that show, I HATED that Wash died in 'Serenity'!! So it was nice how he got a little more time to live, & that Zoe had one more time with her hubby.
Did she die two years after Wash?
Since his spirit seemed to of came into Xander after HIS death, it makes you wonder if Zoe's went into Cordelia's after hers.
Or Zoe could wake up from one hell of a drinking bender and when she tells everyone about her adventure as a white girl on 'Earth That Was', they could try an intervention..lol!
Review By [MichelleWinchester
] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GundumM
Review By [GundumM
] • Date [13 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dracoluvr
really awesome story. great work. i kinda hope you continue, but i dont know if it'd really work. let me know if you do?
Review By [dracoluvr
] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spurious
This was really cute. I almost want to see more of this but I am not sure it would work for more than a snippet or two.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
You've nailed my fear - I'm not sure if I can add more to this. We'll see, but for now I'm going to concentrate on my continuing stories.
Review By [spurious
] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]