Oh,I love this. I've always wanted to see a stargate crossover with supernatural. I can see Jack as a hunter. Iw ould love to see more of this. You are also a really good writter, keep up the great work.
Cya Aussie Mel
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [22 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Pretty good, although a couple little things (extraneous words) managed to slip by your beta. I'm guessing "mooch around" is a Kiwi term analagous to "hang out" or something along those lines.
Comments from author:
You're on the mark in terms of mooching. The extraneous words got by me because my beta has fled to go flunk her BA. Give a gal a hand and point me to a few examples? I need all the help I can get here. Thanks for the review, btw.
Review By [Kethric] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated